题目内容

【题目】书面表达(15分)

随着社会的发展,人们的生活似乎离不开手机,但是手机占据人们的生活带来一个重要的问题,人与人之间交流少了,亲情、友情应该如何维系?请谈谈你的建议。

要点所示

1. 在现代社会中,手机的发明改变着社会,手机起着重要的作

2. 手机让人们的联系更加容易,让地球变小了

3. 但过去人们常常交谈,而现在却是交流少了,玩手机的多了

4. 有些学生用手机玩游戏,浪费许多时间,严重影响学习

5. 你的建议。(至少两条)

参考词汇:

手机:cellphone 智能手机:smartphone

要求:

1. 词数:80词左右

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。

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【答案】

参考范文

One possible version

With the development of IT information industry, there has been a dramatic rise in cell phone, which are now essential to millions of people. But everything has two sides.

On one hand, cellphones contribute a lot to daily life. Firstly, cellphones enable people to easily and quickly communicate with one another whenever and wherever you are. Secondly, it is the multifunction of cell phones that help us survive those boring moments.

On the other hand, the disadvantages can never be denied. The most disadvantages is the unknown effects on health in case of over-use. Furthermore, if people become too reliant on the use of cell phones, our face to face skills may decline.

From my perspective, any new invention has its drawbacks, but such negative aspects cannot always diminish its popularity. I strongly suggest that we use cell phones moderately and appropriately to make them more beneficial.

名师点评

考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点

这篇文章语言规范,叙述清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。

【解析】略

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