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【题目】书面表达

今年是我市创建全国文明城市的关键一年。作为中学生，我们应积极参与。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文。开头已给出，不计入总词数。

l. 尊敬老师，对人礼貌；

2. 帮助他人，友善待人；

3. 遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯；

4. 保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等；

5. 个人观点。

参考词汇：尊敬 respect；对

……礼貌 be polite to；斑马线 zebra crossing

Our city is now making its effort to become a national civilized city. As students, what should we do?

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Answer 1

【答案】Our city is now making its effort to become a national civilized city. As students, what should we do?

We should respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those in need and be friendly to people around us. Besides, we must obey traffic rules. When crossing the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red. What's more, we should protect our environment. For example, We mustn't step on the grass and climb trees. Wemustn't throw litter' everywhere.

Let's try our best to make our hometown a civilized city.

【解析】试题本文是提纲类作文。首先认真审题和阅读提示。根据提示（作为中学生，我们应积极参与创建全国文明城市。）可知此文时态主要是一般现在时，要使用建议型句型（we should/must/are supposed to…），动笔前要认真阅读提示：（l. 尊敬老师，对人礼貌；2. 帮助他人，友善待人；3. 遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯；4. 保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等；5. 个人观点。），内容要包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译。不要写得太少，字数在80词以上。要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。写完以后，注意再读一遍，看看有无拼写、语法错误（时态、主谓一致等）。（一）根据要点列提纲：l.尊敬老师，对人礼貌：respect our teachers and be polite to others. ；2.帮助他人，友善待人：help those in need and be friendly to people around us.；3.遵守交通规则，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯：obey traffic rules，When crossing the street, we should walk on the zebra crossing，mustn't go across the street when the traffic lights are red.；

4.保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等：we should protect our environment.， We mustn't step on the grass and climb trees. We mustn't throw litter everywhere.；5个人观点：Let's try our best to make our hometown a civilized city.（二）连词成句，连句成篇，注意使用连词；（三）写完以后再阅读一遍，检查是否有语法、单词拼写等错误，或不合适的地方。