Question

【题目】书面表达（共计20分）

假如你叫玛丽，你校正在开展一项专题讨论：九年级学生要不要加强体育锻炼？根据以下信息给报社写封信，介绍讨论情况并说出自己的观点。

65%的学生认为	35%的学生认为
1. 应该每天进行体育锻炼。	1. 锻炼浪费时间，使人疲劳。
2. 可以做早操，打乒乓球，但时间不要太长。	2. 运动后很兴奋，不能很快投入学习。
3. 锻炼有助于健康，减少疾病。	3. 运动中可能会受伤。
4. 运动是大脑休息，学习效果更好。	……

要求： 1. 开头已给出（不计入总词数）；

2. 参考词汇：effective (有效的），reduce 减少，brain大脑。

Dear Editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether students should take physical exercise. _

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Yours,

Mary

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether students should take physical exercise. 65% of the students think they should take exercise every day, such as doing morning exercises, playing ping-pong and basketball, but it shouldn’t take up too much time. Proper exercise can keep healthy and reduce diseases. What’s more, sports let their brains have a rest so that they can study effectively.

On the other hand, 35% believe taking exercise is a waste of time and it is tiring. After having sports, they are much too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. It’s also possible to get hurt in sports.

Yours,

Mary

【解析】

【名师点评】这是一篇比较优秀的作文。首先这篇作文的结构完整，层次分明。这篇作文共有两段。第一段是承接题目中所给出的开头，点明主题之后，叙述了支持学生应该参加体育锻炼的学生们的观点。要点完整，表达准确。第二段是另外一部分同学的观点，他们觉得学生们不应该参加体育锻炼。其次这篇作文较好的注意了语句之间的链接，力求使文章表达流畅。文章句型的使用如65% of the students think... such as...，What’s more, sports let their brains have a rest so that they can study effectively.，After having sports,，It’s also possible get hurt in sports等。