Question

【题目】 假如你是李华,你们班将在本周六组织一次春游,你打算邀请外教Peter Smith参加。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,告诉他春游的相关情况。

Time	7 o'clock on Saturday
Place	Olympic Forest Park
Activities	longdistance walking race, have a picnic...
Tips	wear sports shoes, take a camera

要求：

(1)邮件须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。

(2)邮件中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

(3)词数80个左右 (开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。

参考词汇：spring outing (春游)

Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm writing to invite you to take part in __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】【高分范文】

Dear Mr. Smith,

I'm writing to invite you to take part in our spring outing on Saturday. We'll meet at the school gate at 7 o'clock in the morning.

We're going to the Olympic Forest Park by underground. We're going to have a long-distance walking race from its south gate to the top of a hill. Then we'll have a picnic at noon. After lunch, we can play some games together.

If you come, don't forget to wear your sports shoes and take your lunch. Besides, you'd better take your camera because we'll have prizes for beautiful pictures of the outing.

I'm looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

【审题指导】细读所给文字提示,提取以下信息：
1. 本文要求写一份电子邮件,故文体为应用文；
2. 文章在介绍未来的活动时,人称为第一人称,时态为一般将来时；
3. 词数80个左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数),文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

【写作指导】

邀请参加学校春游
要点提示	素材串联
开头：提出邀请	邀请参加学校春游,并给出时间、地点(invite you to take part in...)
正文：介绍具体活动安排	1. 乘地铁去奥林匹克森林公园(by underground) 2. 举行长途步行比赛(have a long-distance walking race) 3. 野餐和游戏(have a picnic, play some games)
结尾：叮嘱相应事宜	穿运动鞋和带相机(wear sports shoes, take your camera)