Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是John，你校试行在课间播放音乐．你班同学对此讲行了讨论．看法不一大多数同学赞同，而部分同学反对。请你根据表格中所提供的信息；给你们的校长写封信。介绍大家的观点。同时谈谈自己的看法。

	赞同者	反对者
原因	1音乐给人们带来快乐。 2使大脑得到放松。 3能提高下一节课的学习效率。	l课间时间太短，播放音乐达不到预期效果。 2有时上课还沉浸在课间音乐中，对上课有影响。
你的 观点	自拟l一2个观点

要求：1词数90左右。信的开头和结尾已为你写好．不计入总词数。

2完整表达表中所示内容，句式规范，字迹工整。

3可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯，文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名

4参考词汇：学习效率study efficiency；预期的expected；沉浸在……中be lost in。

Dear Headmaster,

We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in

our class gave their ideas.

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Yours sincerely,

John

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Headmaster,

We have had a discussion about whether to play music during the break. All the students in our class gave their ideas.

Most of us agree that the music should be played. They think listening to music can make them feel happy. Besides, music helps them relax after hard work. What's more. music can help them improve the study efficiency.

On the other hand, some students disagree. They doubt whether they can get expected results by listening to music, as the break is short. In addition, in class some students are still lost in music, which has a bad effect on students.

I think what we need is peace instead of the noise produced by the music. So I don't like music. What's your idea?

Yours sincerely,

John

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给我们的校长写封信，介绍大家对课间播放音乐的讨论，同时谈谈自己的看法。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Most of us agree that……，They think……，They doubt……，I think……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。