Question

【题目】书面表达

初中毕业之际,校报“英语角”栏目向同学们征集毕业典礼活动计划。假定你是李华,请根据要点写一封信,提出你的建议。

写作要点:

毕业典礼
时间、地点	7月1日,学校报告厅
三项活动	1.校长讲话送祝福
	2.学生发言谈感恩
	3.……

写作要求:1.80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);

2.不能出现真实的校名和人名,否则不得分;

3.写作要点都必须用上,紧扣主题,适当发挥。

参考词汇:毕业典礼graduation ceremony;前进中学Qianjin Middle School;学校报告厅the school hall。

Dear editor,

I'm very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the graduation ceremony.

This is what we will do.I hope you will choose my plan.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear editor,

I'm very happy to have the chance to show you my plan for the graduation ceremony.The ceremony will be held in our school hall on July 1st.I have planned three activities for it.First of all,we would like to invite our headmaster to make a speech and give us his best wishes for a bright future.After that,one of the students will read a thank-you letter to all the people who have helped us.In the end,some pictures will be shown to share the happy time we have had together.

This is what we will do.I hope you will choose my plan.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍毕业典礼活动计划。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般现在时，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：The ceremony will……，one of the students will read……，some pictures will be shown to……等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。