Question

【题目】Writing.

Imagine you are having a party. What kind of party is it? Who is at the party? What are people doing at the moment? Please write a short passage within 60 words.

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Answer 1

【答案】Today is my birthday. I am having a party at my home. My parents make a lot of dishes. I invite many friends to my party. Look! Amy is playing the piano. She plays very well. Tom and Paul are playing cards. There is a big cake on the table. Mary, Hellen and Jack are eating the cake. It is very delicious. Where is Brian? Oh, here he is. He is dancing with Alice. We are happy at the party.

【解析】

这篇作文要求我们描写一次聚会。题目中列出了几个问题，利用这些问题来组织语言，丰富细节，串联成文。审题可知，短文中应包括以下几个内容：首先介绍这是一个什么聚会；然后是聚会上都有谁；重点是介绍人们在干什么。短文叙述的是正在发生的事情，因此文章应以现在进行时为主来叙述，其构成是am/is/are+动词的现在分词，注意根据主语的人称和单复数形式，选择适当的be动词形式，并注意动词现在分词形式的变化。写作时应注意英语句式结构和汉语的不同，不能根据汉语思维逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见的主谓宾或主系表结构，句式简洁，叙述清晰、明了。也可以使用and，but，so等连接的并列句结构，调整文章节奏。