题目内容
【题目】书面表达(10分)
同学们,在我们的身边,时常会看到一些不好的行为,这些行为污染了我们身边的环境。请你以一个环保小使者的身份并以How to Protect the Environment为题写一篇80词左右的短文。
should | shouldn’t |
多种树 | 使用塑料袋 |
每天打扫教室或自己的房间 | 践踏草坪和摘花 |
保护野生动物 | 乱丢垃圾 |
尽我们最大努力 | 随地吐痰 |
乱砍滥伐 |
How to Protect the Environment
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【答案】
【参考范文】
One possible version:
How to Protect the Environment
Today there is more and more pollution and the environment is becoming worse and worse. So we have to know how to protect the environment. Here are some ways.
First, we can stop driving our personal cars. We can go to school or work on foot or by bus. Not only can it protect environment, but also it is good for our health.
Second, we are not supposed to drop litter anywhere, we should put them into the trash bin. And it’s best to pick up the litter on the ground when we see them.
Third, we should save the paper, the water, the food and so on.
Fourth, we should protect the trees and we should plant more trees.
I think if everyone does something to protect the environment, our world will be much better.
【名师点评】
考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【写作亮点】
这篇文章语言规范,叙述清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。短文运用了一些短语和句式,上下文衔接的很好,要点齐全。句子表达的很流畅。
【解析】略