Question

【题目】书面表达。

假如你叫李华，初中生活即将结束，请根据下面的思维导图为你的好朋友写一段毕业留言。 内容包括：他/她给你留下的深刻印象、你们在一起的快乐时光以及对他/她最美好的祝愿。

要求：1. 提示词语仅供参考，也可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；

2. 90词左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】Our middle school life will soon come to an end. But I'll never forget you，Wang Ziyuan. You're my best friend. You're tall. You're so smart and so outgoing that everyone wants to be friends with you. I'll never forget the smile on your face. I always laughed a lot when I was with you. We used to play basketball on the playground and had a good time. At this very moment，I'm saying goodbye to you and giving all my best wishes to you. I hope you will be happy and healthy forever. I wish you great success in the future.

【解析】

这是一篇以校园生活为话题的习作。根据思维导图为好朋友写一段毕业留言。写作前可以列出一个提纲，主要从三个方面去表达：朋友留下的深刻印象、一起的快乐时光以及对对朋友最美好的祝愿。初中生活即将结束会用到一般将来时，描写留下的印象用一般现在时，过去的经历用一般过去时来表达，写作时，还需注意语句间的衔接，使用恰当的连词，使文意连贯，表达流畅。