题目内容
【题目】【2015年襄阳市初中毕业生学业水平考试英语试题】书面表达 (本大题满分15分)
做家务是家庭成员的义务。作为家庭成员之一,你一定做过不少力所能及的家务活。请根据提示写一篇英语短文讲述一次你做家务或学做家务的经历或故事,与大家一起分享。
1. 写作要点提示:
1)你是否喜欢做家务、你常做哪些家务;
2)重点讲述一次你做家务或学做家务的经历或故事(包括起因、过程、结果等);
3)你父母对你所做家务的评价或你个人的收获、感受。
2. 写作要求:
短文的内容应包含所提示的要点,语言要流畅,可围绕提示要点适当增加情节,以使短文的意思连贯;短文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名及地名;短文的词数在90词左右。
【答案】
Do you like doing housework? I like doing housework. I will help my mother do housework when I am free. Because I think parents are very tired after a day’s work. I want them to have a good rest. I often help clean room, wash dishes, take away the rubbish and so on.
Last Sunday, my mother was on duty. She must go home late. So I wanted to try to make dinner. I boiled some noodles first. Then I cut up some tomatoes and broke two eggs. Put them into the noodles. When my mother came back home, I had already made two bowls of noodles with tomato and eggs. My mother was surprised and happy. She praised me. I was happy, too.
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇命题作文,让我们记叙一次自己学做家务的经历,内容是开放式的,我们需要自己发挥想象力,把这些内容补充完整。首先我们应先点明自己是否喜欢做家务,喜欢做哪些家务;然后我们要详细的记叙一次做家务的经历,包括起因、过程和结果;最后是父母对自己的评价以及自己的感受。我们可以将短文分成两段,第一段介绍自己喜欢做哪些家务,第二段具体叙述这次经历。通过分析可知,第一段我们应使用一般现在时态,第二段用一般过去时态。写作时,要注意谓语动词形式的变化。另外,还需要使用一些句型和短语,使整篇短文意思连贯,表达流畅。
写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者按照题目的要求,叙述了自己一次做家务的经历。首先这篇短文的内容非常完整,有头有尾,要点全面;其次短文结构清晰,层次分明;而且这篇短文使用了正确的时态和人称,符合英语的表达规范。作者写作时,还使用了较为丰富的句型,如I will help my mother do housework when I am free. Because I think parents are very tired after a day’s work.中,时间状语从句和原因状语从句;I want them to have a good rest中句型want sb. to do sth.;When my mother came back home, I had already made two bowls of noodles with tomato and eggs.中过去完成时的使用等等。这使得整篇短文意思流畅、连贯。
【题目】【2016江苏连云港】请阅读下面短文,再短文后表格中的空白处填上适当的单词
Title: Inner voice helps a lot throughout our lives.
When you couldn't open your mouth till the first two years on the earth, inner voice helps you understand things. Inner voice always shows thoughts and ideas in the body.
It justifies (判断) what is right and what is wrong. When we go against inner voice, we usually feel uncomfortable throughout our lives.
Sometimes when we are feeling sad, we seem to need some kind of support in spirit. We usually speak to our closest friend or our dearest family member during times of unhappiness to feel better. After talking to them, we suddenly feel active again, because our inner voice reminds us to get on with things and leave the things of the past in the memory.
Inner voice is always right most of the time, because it knows us better than others and even ourselves. It's good to go by inner voice most of the time. Whenever you are trying to smoke, or whenever you are asked to choose one side in an argument, you are always worried about the result. During these times, your inner voice tells you what to do. If you don't follow your inner voice, you might be unhappy in the future. It's our own choice to either pay no attention to our inner voice or follow it and search for real happiness.
Title: Inner voice helps a lot throughout our lives.
Passage outline | Supporting details |
Introduction to inner voice | Before we can talk, inner voice 【1】 understand things, and shows thoughts and ideas in the body. |
Things that inner voice helps us with | Inner voice tells us what is right and what is wrong. We usually have an uncomfortable【2】throughout our lives when we go against inner voice. Inner voice reminds us to get on with things and leave the things of the past. |
【3】 why we should go by inner voice | It knows us better than others and even ourselves. It tells us 【4】 to do when we are always worried about the result of our choice. We might be unhappy in the future without 【5】our inner voice. |