Question

【题目】书面表达

根据图片内容写一篇不少于60词的短文。

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Answer 1

【答案】Hi, I am Jim. I am a boy. I am a student in Hong Xing Middle School. On school days, I usually get up at six o’clock in the morning. Then I take a shower. At seven, I have a glass of milk and some bread for my breakfast. I go to school at about ten past seven. Classes begin at eight o’clock. I have four classes in the morning. In the afternoon, I have two classes. At half past four in the afternoon, it’s time for me to play football with my classmates. We are all tired but happy. Then I go home and do my homework at six in the evening. I usually go to bed at nine. This is my school day. What about you, please tell me.

【解析】

本文属于图画作文，描述吉姆一天的生活。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如usually, get up, in the morning, take a shower, a glass of, at+时间点, it’s time for sb to do以及what about。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。