Question

【题目】书面表达。

不同的人喜欢不同的音乐。你喜欢什么音乐，你又不喜欢什么音乐？请你写一篇短文谈谈你对音乐的不同喜好及其原因。

要求: 1. 中心突出，语言简练，观点明确;

2. 80词左右。

提示词: R&B music; noisy music

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Answer 1

【答案】Different people like different music. I like listening to music in my free time. I like music that has great lyrics and I can sing along with. I prefer gentle and quiet music. Some R&B music is my favorite. This kind of music often reminds me of someone who I care about and makes me feel happy or sad. I dislike noisy music or songs with words that I can't understand. What kind of music do you like?

【解析】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如like doing，listen to music，in my free time，this kind of，care about等。而Different people like different music./ I prefer gentle and quiet music. / This kind of music often reminds me of someone who I care about and makes me feel happy or sad.等多种句式的运用更是为文章增色不少。