Question

【题目】【广东省2015年中考英语试题】书面表达（15分） 每年夏天，溺水事故频发。 请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。

内容包括：

1.我们应该如何防止此类事故发生？（两点建议）

2.如果看到有人落水，我们应该如何施救？

3.呼吁同学们热爱生命，注意安全。

作文要求：1.不能照抄原文；不得在作文中提到出现的学校真实姓名。

2.语句连贯，词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数，也不必抄写在答题卡上。

Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?

Answer 1

【答案】

Almost every year in summer, many people are reported dead from drowning accidents. How to prevent such sad accidents?In my opinion, we shouldn’t go swimming in dangerous places or places we know little abou, such sa reservoies and rivers . Second , we had better not swim when we feel tired or hungry.

If we see someone fall into the water, we shouldsave him in a perpor way . For example , we can shout loudly as we can to get those with good swimming skills to help him.

Life is valuable . We should take it seriously. We must remember that safety should always come first while swimming.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类的作文。根据提示内容主要写两点关于如何防止溺水的建议，发现落水，我们应该怎么做，对人们发出注意安全的呼吁。我们主要用到提建议的句式：we should/ had better/we can 等等。注意if条件状语从句的应用。

写作亮点：这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。如提建议的句式：In my opinion, we shouldn’t go…, we had better not swim….条件状语从句等。