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【题目】书面表达(10分)

请根据框中所提供的信息,介绍一下你的朋友刘涛,写一篇短文,不少于60字。

姓名

刘涛

年龄

12

电话号码

82761383

爱好

打棒球,看电视

收藏

5个棒球,3个棒球拍,1个篮球

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【答案】

参考范文

I have many friends. Liu Tao is one of my best friends. He is twelve years old. His telephone number is 82761383. He likes sports very much .But his playing baseball is his favorite. And he likes watching TV. Now he has five baseballs, three baseball bats and one basketball.

名师点评

这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我的朋友。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点

本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我的朋友的名字,接下来介绍朋友的年龄和电话号码,最后还介绍了他的爱好。此外one of,very much等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

【解析】略

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New rules and behavior standards (行为规范) for middle school students came out in March. Middle school is going to use a new way to decide who the top students are. 1 They will also be kids who dont dye (染) their hair, smoke or drink. Here are some of the new rules.

Tell the truth.

Have you ever copied someone elses work on an exam? Dont do it again! Thats not honest. If you have played computer games for two hours in your room, dont tell your parents that you have done homework.

2 Good students love animals and care for other people. April is Bird-Loving Month in our country. Is your school doing anything to celebrate it? 3 That way, you can learn more about animals and how to protect them. Have you ever quarreled(吵架) with your teammates when your basketball team lost? Only working together can make your team stronger. Be friendly to the people you are with. Try to think of others, not only yourself.

Be open to new ideas.

Have you ever thought that people could live on the moon? Perhaps youll discover Earth II someday. Dont look down at anyone. Everyones ideas are important. 4

Protect yourself.

Has someone ever taken money from one of your classmates? Dont let it happen to you. If you have to go home late, you should let your parents know.

Use the Internet carefully.

5 But some things on the Internet arent forkids, so try to look at Web pages that are good for you. You can use the Web for fun or homework.

根据材料内容,从下面五个选项中选出能填入文中空缺处的最佳选项,使短文意思通顺、内容完整,并将其标号填写在下面题号后的横线上。

A. Do more at school

B. You should welcome them, because new ideas make life better for everyone.

C. The Internet can be useful for your studies.

D. The best students wont only have high marks.

E. You should join!

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