Question

【题目】请你根据以下要点，写一篇短文，词数在90个左右。

要点:1.成龙(Jackie Chan)是世界上最伟大的功夫巨星之一。作为歌手和导演也很有名。

2. 1954年出生于香港，自小就梦想进入电影业。

3. 1978年的电影《醉拳》( Drunken Master )标志着他成功生涯的开始，片中他成功地将幽默和激动人心的动作结合在一起。

4.他的成就远不仅限于功夫巨星。他致力于慈善工作很多年。

5.我认为……

注意:1.第5点必须用1 ~ 2句话作适当的发挥。

2.短文必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】Jackie Chan is one of the greatest kung fu superstars in the world. He is also famous as a singer and a director. Jackie Chan was born in Hong Kong in 1954. He dreamt of entering the film industry when he was young. The film Drunken Master in 1978 marked the beginning of his successful career. In the film he successfully joined humour and exciting action together. His achievements are far snore than a kung fu superstar. He has devoted many years to charity work. I think he is such a great person that he will always be remembered.

【解析】本文属于材料作文，主要介绍成龙。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。

【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如one of+形容词的最高级， be born in, dream of, mark, career, achievement以及devote to等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。