题目内容
【题目】书面表达(满分15分)
假设Kate是你的同班同学,根据以下所提供的信息写一篇描写她的文章。
Name | Kate |
Age | Thirteen |
Telephone number | (010)86503213 |
Looks(外表) | long hair, big eyes ,a small nose, a small mouth |
School | No.1 Junior High School |
Class | 4 |
Grade | 7 |
Favorite color | green |
要求:1. 根据表格提供的信息,请你以My friend为题目介绍你的朋友;
2. 条理清晰,语句通顺,书写规范整洁,50个单词左右。
My Friend
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【答案】
【参考范文】
My Friend
My classmate is Kate. She is thirteen years old. She has a round face, big eyes, a small nose and a small mouth. She has long hair. She is in No.1 Junior High School. She is in Class 4,Grade7. Her favorite color is green and I also like green best. We often play games after class.
【名师点评】
本文叙述了自己的朋友Kate的情况,所以句子的主语应该用第三人称单数形式,句子的时态用一般现在时,要注意主谓一致,所写的句子要符合英语语法,不要遗漏要点。
【写作亮点】
短文用了一些短语和句式,如:has a round face有一个圆脸;in No.1 Junior High School在初中第一中学;like best最喜欢。用了连词and增加了文章的亮点。
【解析】略