题目内容
就在昨天外教(Mr. Black)的口语课上, 你(Liu Ming)使用手机时被老师发现,手机被收走。请用英语给教师写一封信道歉,内容应包括以下要点:
(字数:120左右, 信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
1、表示你的歉意;
2、解释为什么当时使用手机(说出至少一个理由);
3、提出自己的请求并适当表态。
Dear Mr. Black,
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Best wishes!
Yours sincerely,
Liu Ming
Dear Mr. Black,
I am really sorry about my using the mobile phone in your lecture yesterday. Please accept my heart-felt apology for being so rude a student.
I know any word might sound a make-up excuse. But I didn’t use my mobile phone for no reason. I was trying to (….学生当时使用手机的理由….) Therefore, I got no choice but try sending them a text message in class and that was exactly what I was doing when you discovered.
Anyway, using a mobile phone in a classroom was not acceptable to any teacher. I make sure it will not happen again. But I do need my phone back to keep in touch with others.
Will you be so kind as to give it back to me. Thanks a lot!
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely
Liu Ming
解析试题分析:题目要求写一封道歉信,向外教道歉。写作要点包括:表达歉意;解释使用手机的原因;提出请求并作出保证。使用第一人称进行写作,注意书信的格式和礼貌用语;书写工整,不要出现标点和拼写错误,正确使用时态和语法知识。
【亮点说明】范文使用了非谓语动词my using the mobile phone,being so rude a student,using a mobile phone;
固定句型:got no choice but try sending them a text message;表语从句what I was doing;宾语从句make sure it will not happen again等语法知识,显示了一定的语法基础;
范文还使用了一些固定短语:keep in touch with;so kind as;give it back to等,使作文内容变得充实;
范文注意使用But,Therefore,Anyway等衔接前后句和上下文,是作文显得紧凑,前后联系紧密。
考点:书信类作文
某英语报社开展就中学生可不可以带手机上学的话题讨论。假如你是李华,请你根据下表所提供的信息,向该报编辑写一封英文信,发表观点。
| 手机的优点 | 1.便于与父母和朋友联系; 2.能增加乐趣。 |
| 带手机上学存在的问题 | 1.上课时使用手机干扰教学 2.用手机聊天、发短信费时费钱。 |
| 建议 | 1.上课时不许使用手机; 2.贵重物品,个人宜妥善保管。 |
书面表达(满分25分)
Dear Editor,
I’m a senior two student . I’m writing to tell you my opinion
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