Question

假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’s Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：
1.目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题;
2.骑自行车的益处，如能环保有利健康等。
注意：1.词数：120词左右；
2.演讲稿开头已给出，且该部分不计入总词数。
参考词汇：低碳生活（low-carbon life）节能(energy saving)
Good morning, everyone,
I am Li hua from Xingguang Middle School.The topic of my speech is “Let’s Ride Bicycles”.
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      
                                                                                      

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone,
I am Li Hua form Xingguang Middle School．The topic of my speech is "Let's Ride Bicycles"．
As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams.
How can we solve the problems then? As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy – saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. What’s more, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficial to our health.
Therefore, let’s take the responsibility to build up a low carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us!
Thank you!

解析试题分析：本文是应用文中常见的演讲稿。话题是号召同学多骑自行车.有很强的可写性，文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，但只是一个提纲，考生还需要做适当的发挥。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。本篇文章在写作时不要啰嗦，力求简洁的表达自己的观点。
【亮点说明】所给范文开头紧扣题目，起到了开篇点题的作用。As is known to all, with the improvement of people’s living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life.这句话用了定语从句和现在分词做状语， As far as I’m concerned, riding bicycles is a good solution. bicycles don’t need any petrol and they are energy – saving. bicycles are environmentally friendly because they won’t give off waste gas. 这句话用了动名词做主语。文章中上下文的衔接句成了本范文的一个亮点，For one thing, For another, What's more, L等的使用使文章浑然一体。
考点：考查提纲类书面表达