Question

假如你是李华，红星中学的学生。2013年11月8日菲利宾遭受台风“海燕”袭击，你们班组织了一次募捐活动，帮助受灾地区的孩子重返校园。请你根据以下表格中的提示，向学校英文校刊投稿，介绍这次活动情况。
提示词：flea market 跳蚤市场
注意： 1. 文章开头已为你写好；
2. 添加适当的信息，使文章流畅；
3. 词数不少于60。

内  容
灾情	数以万计人民死亡，日常生活遭受严重的破坏，很多孩子失去家庭和学校
活动	组织班会，谈论支援办法
	捐献零用钱；组织跳蚤市场吸引学校跟多人募捐；获得1万5千元
愿望	菲利宾人民早日战胜灾难；孩子早日返校

As you know, Super typhoon Haiyan hit the eastern seaboard of the Philippines on November 8th, 2013…….
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Answer 1

As you know, Super typhoon Haiyan hit the eastern seaboard of the Philippines on November 8th, 2013. It caused great damages to people’s life. Millions of people were killed and thousands of children lost their families and schools.
On hearing the news, we all felt sorry for them. In order to show our pity, we held a class meeting last Monday to discuss how to help the people, especially the homeless children, in the disaster-stricken areas. At last, we came up with a great idea and a flea market was held in the school yard to appeal students to sell their old things and raise money. Many students took part in it and 1,500 Yuan was contributed. We did hope what we had done could express our great concerns, and it was also our wish that the victims could beat the storms earlier and the children could return to school soon

解析试题分析：考查提纲类书面表达，这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来. 动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。
【亮点说明】范文中出现一些比较常见的短语In order to 为了，At last最后， came up with想起 appeal sb to do呼吁某人做某事，took part in参加。On hearing the news, we all felt sorry for them这个句子中on 表示一。。就 。In order to show our pity, we held a class meeting last Monday to discuss how to help the people, especially the homeless children, in the disaster-stricken areas.这个句子中in order to do 表目的状语，especially尤其。We did hope what we had done could express our great concerns这个句子中did用来表强调动词hope, what we had done引导主语从句。it was also our wish that the victims could beat the storms earlier 在这个句子中that引导wish 的同位语从句。
考点： 提纲类作文