Question

15．下面是Sarah给Sue的e-mail，请你仔细阅读原文，然后根据你的情况，以Sue为名给Sarah发一封e-mail．字数在80个词左右．
请注意：1．不得写出自己或学校的真实名称；2．不得照抄原文．
Dear Sue，
How are you？Summer holiday began last week．My brother and I are having our holiday．During the holiday we are planning to learn swimming，climb the mountains and do many other things．Yesterday we went to the museum with my parents．On the way home，we went shopping．My mother bought me a beautiful skirt and a new recorder for my English study．We are sure we'll have a very good time．
How about you，my dear friend？Have you made any plans for your summer holiday？Please write me soon．
Sarah

Dear Sarah，
Thanks for your e-mail．I'm glad you are enjoying your holiday．Now let me tell you something about my holiday．            ．
Sue．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信．本题材料主要通过一份来信给出，故动笔前要认真阅读来信，争取在回信中对来信内容都有所回应．写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误．注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯．
高分句型：
①Now let me tell you something about my holiday．现在让我告诉你一些关于我假期的事．句子考查let sb do sth让某人做某事，后面跟动词原形．
②Also I'll help my parents with their farm work．我也会帮助我的父母做农活．句子考查短语help sb with sth表示帮着某人做某事．

解答 Dear Sarah，
Thanks for your e-mail．I'm glad you are enjoying your holiday．Now let me tell you something about my holiday（高分句型）．（引出话题）I didn't do well in my maths exam，so the most important thing for me in the holiday is that I must spend most of the time on it．I'll do some more exercises．When I have time，I'll visit some friends．Also I'll help my parents with their farm work（高分句型）．After the farm work we will make a trip to Yellow Mountains．I believe we'll enjoy it．（假期中将要做的事情）
I hope you can come to see me sometime in the holiday．（希望）
Sue

点评 注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多．写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑．