2. 字数不少于60。

Dear Jeff,

I’m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing School. I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’ re in Beijing.

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Dear Jeff,

   I’m Li Hua from Beijing Hongxing School . I’m very happy to learn that you’re going to stay with my family while you’re in Beijing.

   While you are here, we’ll provide you with a room of your own with a bed, a desk, a couple of chairs and a TV. You’ll also have your own bathroom. Our school is quite close to our home, so we could go to school together by bike. At noon we’ll eat at the school dining hall. I’m sure you’ll like the delicious Chinese food there, and enjoy talking with friends over lunch. Classes in our school usually finish at 4:00 in the afternoon. You can then join other students in playing games or swimming. It will be a lot of fun.

If you have any questions or requests, please let me know. We’ll try our best to make your stay here in Beijing a pleasant experience.

Best wishes,

Li Hua

(2)通知的写作

通知是一种安排活动或布置工作时使用的文体,包括了口头通知和书面通知。口头通知是当面向有关人员口授有关活动的信息,而书面通知是以布告的形式把事情通知给有关人员。通知的要素是时间,地点,对象,事件具体内容,注意事项等。通知的语言应该是简洁明了,直截了当。还应该注意要有一定的逻辑顺序。

例:

广播通知:

你校学生会将为来访的美国朋友举办一个晚会,要在学校广播中宣布此事,并欢迎大家参加。为使美国朋友能听懂,请你用英语写一篇广播通知。

要点如下:

   宗旨:欢迎来访的美国朋友

   组织者:学生会

   时间:7月13日(星期六)晚7:30

   活动内容:音乐,跳舞,唱歌,游戏,交换小礼品(请包装好,签名并在包装外面写上几个祝愿词)

May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. The Students’ Union is going to hold a party on Saturday evening, July 13, to welcome our friends from the United States. The party will be held in the roof garden of the Main Building. It will begin at 7:30 PM. There will be music, dancing, singing, games and exchange of gifts. You may bring along a small gift for this purpose. Remember to wrap it up, sign your name and write a few words of good wishes.

Don’t forget: 7:30, Saturday evening, roof garden, Main Building. It’s sure to be a lot of fun. Everybody is welcome.

面表达获得高分的六大特点

①条理性。指的是合理布局文章结构。首先在文章思路、组织材料、叙述顺序等方面要有一定的条理性。其次根据需要安排好段落,各段之间要层次分明,要重视每段的开头和结尾,开头语是总领句,结尾语是总结句。

②准确性。要求写出语法正确的句子,包括时态、语态、用词和句法等,要准确、地道地表达。必须牢牢掌握常用句型或习惯表达,避免中式英语,注意中英用法差异,养成用英语写作的习惯。

③流畅性。根据整篇文章的需要,有效采用不同的连接手段使文章层次清楚,行文连贯。

④多样性。语言简洁,不重复。根据内容写出句式多样的语句,这也是新课标对写作的评价标准。

⑤思想性。新课标对写作的要求,增加了情感因素。在准确流畅地表达写作要点的同时,适当增加句子的感情色彩,增加一些人情味,使文章读起来更亲切,完全达到与读者交流的目的。

⑥美观性。指卷面布局合理,书写规范、清楚、干净、整洁。

书面表达容易扣分的环节:

①英语标点符号和大小写使用错误。

②文章里面出现汉字、汉语拼音等。

③时间分配不合理,给作文留的时间太少,文章没有写完。

④文章缺乏必要的构思,涂改现象严重。

⑤文章词数少于80或超过规定最高要求的试卷从总分中扣2分。

写作步骤

①看题目、看要求、看体裁; ②定文体、定人称、定时态;

③选要点、选要词、选句型; ④重条理、重过渡、重书写

常用的链接词,使文章有整体性、连贯性

表示罗列增加

First, second, third,

First, then / next, after that / next, finally

For one thing…for another…,

On (the) one hand…on the other hand,

Besides / what’s more / in addition / furthermore /

moreover / another / also,

Especially / In particular,

表示时间顺序

now, at present, recently,

after, afterwards, after that, after a while, in a few days,

at first, in the beginning, to begin with,

later, next, finally,

immediately, soon, suddenly, all of a sudden, at that

moment, as soon as, the moment

form now on, from then on,

at the same time, meanwhile,

till, not…until, before, after, when, while, as during,

表示解释说明

now, in addition, for example, for instance, in this case, moreover

furthermore, in fact, actually

表示转折关系

but, however, while, though, or, otherwise, on the contrary, on the other

hand, in contrast, despite, in spite of, even though,

except (for), instead, ofcourse, after all,

表示并列关系

or, and, also, too, not only…but also, as well as,

both…and, either…or, neither…nor

表示因果关系

because, because of, since, now that, as, thanks to…,

due to…, therefore, as a

result (of), otherwise, so…that, such…that

表示条件关系

as (so) long as, on condition that, if, unless

表示让步关系

though, although, as, even if, even though,

whether…or…, however, whoever,

whatever, whichever, wherever, whenever, no matter how

(who, what, which, where, when,whom)

表示举例

for example, for instance, such as…, take…for example

表示比较

be similar to, similarly, the same as, in contrast,

compared with (to)…just like,just as,

表示目的

for this reason,, for this purpose, so that, in order to, so as to,

表示强调

in deed, in fact, surely, certainly, no doubt, without any doubt, truly,

obviously, above all,

表示概括归纳

in a  in short, in brief, on the whole, generally speaking, in my opinion, as faras I know, As we all know, as has been stated, as I have shown,

finally, at last, insummary, in conclusion,

冲刺高考英语书面表达必备短语

1欣赏大自然的风景 to appreciate the scenery of nature 2. 培养公德心 to cultivate the public mindedness 3. 维护健康 to maintain health 4. 保护环境 to protect the environment 5. 开拓视野 to broaden the horizon 6. 开拓心胸 to broaden the mind 7. 调剂生活 to make life pleasant 8. 松散身心 to relax oneself 9. 启迪心灵 to enlighten the mind 10. 灌输知识 to impart knowledge into someone 11. 追求理想 to seek after the ideal 12. 实现抱负 to realize one's ambition 13. 守信用 to keep one's promise 14. 跟上时代 to keep up with the times 15. 欣赏古典文学 to appreciate the classical literature 16. 学习吉他 to learn guitar 17. 陶冶品德 to cultivate the character 18. 贡献国家 to contribute oneself to the country 19. 锻炼身体 to strengthen, exercise the body 20. 缺乏休闲活动 to lack recreations 21. 作笔记 to take notes 22. 使用参考书 to use reference books

3. 参考词汇:经济   economy  n.

Dear Bob,

It’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about our beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

Yours,

Xiaohua

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Possible Version:

Dear Bob,

It’s very kind of you to write me and let me know about our beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Jiangcheng.

The city stands on the bank of the Changjiang river. It is a beautiful place for people to live in. Its economy has been developing rapidly in the past ten years. New factories, houses, and roads have been built. More schools and hospitals are available for its people. However, there are still some problems, such as water and air pollution and heavy traffic in rush hours. In my opinion, Jiangcheng should develop its economy scientifically. I would also think that the growth of its population should be brought under control so that we’ll have a better hometown in future.

Yours,

Xiaohua

(四)应用文:包括书信、通知、便条等。

   (1)书信写作:在我们的日常生活中,我们经常给朋友、父母、亲戚等写信,这些信件都属于私人信件。私人书信是写给亲朋好友的,不仅是互通信息的工具,也是交流感情的渠道。书信写作是高考中经常出现的一种题型。:

例:

NMET   2005北京卷

美国中学生Jeff将要来你所在的红星中学学习中文,经协商安排住在你家。假设你是李华,请给Jeff写一封信,按照下图顺序介绍他来中国后的生活安排。

注意:1. 信的开头已为你写好。

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