10. disappointing 改为disappointed

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Jack was a heavy smoker. His mother didn't like him smoking，and 1.　　

he couldn't give it up. At about 9 o'clock in one evening, Jack was seen 　2.　

smoking in the living-room again. “Don't smoke in the living-room,　 3.　 k+s-5#u　

Jack!”said his mother in an unhappy voice. Heared this，Jack went　 4.　

back his own room and shut the door. While he was sitting in bed,　 5.　

he couldn't help smoke again. About an hour later，Jack's mother　 6.　

smell heavy smoke. She got up and opened Jack's bedroom. Good heavens! 7.　

Jack's quilt was burning while he was sleep！ She quickly got some　 8.　

water and put up the fire. Jack was given a good lesson.“I'll give up　 9.　

smoking from now on, Mum.”Jack said in low but determined voice.　 10.　

答案及解析

9. with 改为without

8. him改为her，人称应该一致，指前面提到的女孩

7. 正确

6. getting 改为get , help do sth “帮助多某事”

5. out 后加of

4. manage 改为managed ,时态应该前后一致k+s-5#u　

3.去掉a

2. while 改为when , 本句用到be doing…when 短语

1.was 改为were