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短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。
文中共有10初语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√)如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划－横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．至允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Mr．Johnson,
I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company．I am eager to being one of them．So I am writing the letter．My name is zhang HuA．I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health．I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University．I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English．I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well．
Beside, I know a little French．And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball．As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it．My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．
请同学们严格按照题目给出的格式改错，否则不得分。如无错误；在该行右边横线上划
一个（√）；若该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右横线上写出该词，并
也用斜线划掉，该行缺一个词；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在该行右边横线上写出该加
的词；若该行错一个词；在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The winter holiday is coming, which makes me very exciting．
I have been looking forward to relax myself and I'd like
to go fishing, climb high mountain and ride my bicycle．
I think I can play football or play the chess with my father
as well．What wonderful time 1 will have during the winter
holiday! But my father has differently opinions．He doesn't
want me to go out．He's afraid that I'll be knocked on by
a truck, fall into rivers, fell off a tree or fight with others．
What's worse, he's afraid I will get lost．1 hate being treated
like a bird kept in a cage．I need freedom but I wii! try to
persuade my father．
查看习题详情和答案>>请同学们严格按照题目给出的格式改错，否则不得分。如无错误；在该行右边横线上划
一个（√）；若该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右横线上写出该词，并
也用斜线划掉，该行缺一个词；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在该行右边横线上写出该加
的词；若该行错一个词；在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The winter holiday is coming, which makes me very exciting．1.
I have been looking forward to relax myself and I'd like 2.
to go fishing, climb high mountain and ride my bicycle． 3.
I think I can play football or play the chess with my father 4.
as well．What wonderful time 1 will have during the winter 5.
holiday! But my father has differently opinions．He doesn't 6.
want me to go out．He's afraid that I'll be knocked on by 7.
a truck, fall into rivers, fell off a tree or fight with others． 8.
What's worse, he's afraid I will get lost．1 hate being treated 9.
like a bird kept in a cage．I need freedom but I wii! try to 10.
persuade my father．
查看习题详情和答案>>
请同学们严格按照题目给出的格式改错，否则不得分。如无错误；在该行右边横线上划
一个（√）；若该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右横线上写出该词，并
也用斜线划掉，该行缺一个词；在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），在该行右边横线上写出该加
的词；若该行错一个词；在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
The winter holiday is coming, which makes me very exciting．【小题1】
I have been looking forward to relax myself and I'd like 【小题2】
to go fishing, climb high mountain and ride my bicycle． 【小题3】
I think I can play football or play the chess with my father 【小题4】
as well．What wonderful time 1 will have during the winter 【小题5】
holiday! But my father has differently opinions．He doesn't 【小题6】
want me to go out．He's afraid that I'll be knocked on by 【小题7】
a truck, fall into rivers, fell off a tree or fight with others． 【小题8】
What's worse, he's afraid I will get lost．1 hate being treated 【小题9】
like a bird kept in a cage．I need freedom but I wii! try to 【小题10】
persuade my father．
第二节：短文改错（共10题，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中共有十处错误，仔细阅读并改正。改正方法如下：
句中多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉；句中缺一词：在缺词处加一个添字符号（∧），并在句子下方写出需要添加的词；句中有错词：在错的词处下划一横线，并在下方写出正确用词。第十一处开始不得分。如：Do you knew a man who have has w
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When tea and coffee was first introduced to Europe in the 18th century, people thought they were harm. So the king of Sweden decided to find whether it was true or not. It was happened that there were two brothers whom were in prison then. The king ordered one of them to drink tea every day and the others coffee. All of them have lived many years. At last the one who had to drink tea every day died in the age of 83 and the other lived much long. Therefore Sweden is today one of the country where many tea and coffee are drunk.