文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改；在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意： 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2.只允许修改10处， 多者（从11处起）不记分。

 One afternoon, I was doing my homework, suddenly I heard someone knocking at

the door. I rose my head, looking out of the window to see who it was. The man of

about 50 with broad shoulders and glasses were standing on the door steps. He was

tall, wearing in an old army coat. He grew a wild beard. A big black hat was pulling

forward over his eyes so that it was hard to see his face clear. His shoes were old and

worn out. It was a big hole in one of his socks. He had with him a black box in one

hand. Only after I took a few more closer look at him I recognize that he used to be

my neighbor ten years age.

文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改；在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意： 1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不记分。
One afternoon, I was doing my homework, suddenly I heard someone knocking at
the door. I rose my head, looking out of the window to see who it was. The man of
about 50 with broad shoulders and glasses were standing on the door steps. He was
tall, wearing in an old army coat. He grew a wild beard. A big black hat was pulling
forward over his eyes so that it was hard to see his face clear. His shoes were old and
worn out. It was a big hole in one of his socks. He had with him a black box in one
hand. Only after I took a few more closer look at him I recognize that he used to be
my neighbor ten years age.

文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
v 增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。
v 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
v 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
v 注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Dear Mr. Brown,
I am writing to thank you with your kind help. Before you came to teach us, I had not interest in English. My pronunciation was terribly : I could only speak a few words. But one and a half yeas later, I now think English fun to learn. I got a lot of from your encouraging words. I will always remember what you said, “ If you try to , you can be No.1 !” I hope you’ve had pleasant journey home and will come to China again sometimes in the future. I will write again and send you the photos we take together.

文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 \ 划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Mark Twain, like you know, was famous in his days as the public speaker. He always liked to play joke
on his friends. One day, the one of his friends lost their wallet and asked him to buy a train ticket for him.
“But I don’t have enough money to pay both your ticket and mine,” Mark Twain said. The friend didn’t
know what to do. “Let’s do this, “ Mark Twain saying, “You can get off the train and when the conductor
comes to check the ticket you can hide under my seat.” Later, however, when the conductor comes to check
the ticket, Mark Twain gave him two tickets-----one for him and the other for his friend.

文中共有10处语言错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线 \ 划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在其下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Mark Twain, like you know, was famous in his days as the public speaker. He always liked to play joke

on his friends. One day, the one of his friends lost their wallet and asked him to buy a train ticket for him.

“But I don’t have enough money to pay both your ticket and mine,” Mark Twain said. The friend didn’t

know what to do. “Let’s do this, “ Mark Twain saying, “You can get off the train and when the conductor

comes to check the ticket you can hide under my seat.” Later, however, when the conductor comes to check

the ticket, Mark Twain gave him two tickets-----one for him and the other for his friend.