请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I
scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,
since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized
however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and
shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to
helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel
every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming andshouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready tohelping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出修改后的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1，每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2，只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Many times when I was at a bad mood I shouted at the people around me. I

scream, shouted and ran as fast as I could relieve my pressure. So it was useless,

since I still had to return to the problem. This term I begin to change. I have realized

however greater the difficulty is, I have to face with it. It’s no use screaming and

shouting at others. Beside, there are teachers and friends around me who are ready to

helping me. As long as I try my best, I can make a progress in any aspect. Now I feel

every day is a pleasant day and the sun is always shining bright on my face.

请你修改一下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last November a English forum was held in Busan International High School of South Korea. Students from eight country took part in the forum representing their schools. I was one of the students in our school who was lucky enough to attend it. At the opening ceremony of the forum, students from Busan International High School play a lot of Korean traditional instruments, some of them were really new to us. The forum was very succeed. Every team did a good job and they highly thought of. During our stay in Korea, what impressed on us most was that Koreans love eating kimchi very much. Besides, in my opinion, it isn’t as deliciously as I had imagined.

文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧） ，并在其下写出该加的词。

删除:把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意:  1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

One day in the restaurant where I worked, I am serving a table of four and each person

had ordered the different kind of fish. Three plate were already on the table when the man

closest to me pointing to one plate and asked me the name of the fish on it. After I could

answer him, he continued to ask me the name of the fish on another one plate. I was about to

answer him while I noticed that the last plate on my tray(托盘) began to fall. They fell noisily

to the floor seconds late, spreading its contents on the carpet. Everyone stared me and I stood

there with a red face.