文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（??），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；

      2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company. I am eager to being one of them. So I am writing the letter. My name is zhang Hua. I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health. I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University. I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English. I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well.

Beside, I know a little French. And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball. As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it. My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

假设你是新华中学的学生李明，班里从外地转来一名同学张华，他一时无法融入新的班集体，感到很苦恼请根据下列要点给他写一封信：

1．帮他分析原因

2. 给他提出建议(至少两条)

3. 陈述你帮助他的具体打算

注意：1．词数：100左右；

2．信的开头和结尾已给出(不算入总词数)；

Dear Zhang Hua,

I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class. So I hope I can give you a hand.

Yours sincerely,

Li Ming　

假设你是新华中学的学生李明，班里从外地转来一名同学张华，他一时无法融入新的班集体，感到很苦恼请根据下列要点给他写一封信：

1．帮他分析原因

2. 给他提出建议(至少两条)

3. 陈述你帮助他的具体打算

注意：1．词数：100左右；

2．信的开头和结尾已给出(不算入总词数)；

Dear Zhang Hua,

I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in getting along well with the new class. So I hope I can give you a hand. ____________________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________________

_____ I toured Zhang Jiajie, I was deeply impressed with its beautiful scenery.

A.For the fust time   B. At first  

C.It was the first time      D. The first time

___________ I toured Zhang Jiajie, I was deeply impressed with its beautiful scenery.