第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号，并在其下写出该词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。
The first time I went to swim was from about 5 years ago. Many friends could swim well and they often laugh at me. So I decided to swim as well as we did. One summer afternoon, the weather was amazed, so I thought it was good for swimming. Thus, I came to the pool but found many boys were already there. I was afraid and did not know what to do. Just as I was wondering, I felt somebody give me a push and I was dropped. Frightened in the water, I wouldn’t help crying. “Help, help! ” I heard some laughter from opposite side. I tried to keep myself balance, only to find the water was just a little above my knee.

第四部分：写作(共两节，满分35分)
第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该
行右边横线上画一个勾(√)；如有错误(每行只有一个错误)，则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线( \ )划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线
划掉。
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。
该行错一个词：在错词的下面画一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的请不要改。
I finish my studies in my junior middle school. Now   76．_________
I am glad to be a student in this famous school. There are   77．_________
many new schoolmates and teachers. His headteacher is a   78．_________
middle-aged man with a pair of glasses. He is very kindly  79．_________
to us. We are all like him. All the teachers in our class can  80．_________
make their classes interested and lively. We have Chinese,   81．_________
maths, the English, physics, chemistry, biology, politics,    82．_________
history, P.E., computer. I like my new school and I like      83．_________
my new classes too. In this famous and beautiful school     84．_________
I hope to making many friends and I can learn a lot.   85．_________

第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）                                  

第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

If someone asks you how you can make you always            76. ________

happy, you will perhaps find rather difficult to give him        77. ________

a proper answer．Did you remember the old saying“No         78. ________

human being can really happy who is not giving or trying      79. ________

to give happiness to others”? If you will always think of         80. ________

taking more from others and give them less，you won’t be           81. ________

able to have happiness in your life even you are very rich.      82. ________

Here’s an article for you. If each of you follow it, there         83. ________

will be all end of many unhappy days of yours．So you should 84. ________

learn to give up your own interests when necessarily to do so.    85. ________

第四部分  写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）　

以下标有题号的每一行均有一个错误，请找出，并按下列情况改正：此行多一个词；把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。此行错一词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

Unlike many other places, our hometown is also facing              76._____

the problem of pollution. Unfortunately, people here have            77._____

realized the importance of protection the natural environment.        78._____

Factories have been taken measures to stop pouring polluted          79._____

water into the rivers. The citizens not longer put waste, such          80._____

as rubbish or human waste into the rivers. Every year,               81._____

a great number trees are planted. As a result,                       82._____

the water in the rivers are becoming cleaner and cleaner.            83._____

The hills around the city were covered with green trees             84._____

and the air here is much more fresher than before.                 85._____

第四部分写作（共两节，满分35分）

第一节 短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分,满分10分)

  假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文， 请你修改你的同桌写的以下作文。 文中共有10处语言错误， 每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号， 并在其下写出该词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线， 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。

      2 只允许修改10处， 多者（从第11处起）不记分。

The first time I went to swim was from about 5 years ago. Many friends could swim well and they often laugh at me. So I decided to swim as well as we did. One summer afternoon, the weather was amazed, so I thought it was good for swimming. Thus, I came to the pool but found many boys were already there. I was afraid and did not know what to do. Just as I was wondering, I felt somebody give me a push and I was dropped. Frightened in the water, I wouldn’t help crying. “Help, help! ” I heard some laughter from opposite side. I tried to keep myself balance, only to find the water was just a little above my knee.