英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下短文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
This afternoon I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didn’t tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know I am wrong. We can tell others our need for help and accept his help. Some day we can help others in return for. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully.

此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。短文中有10处错误，每句最多有两处。错误设计一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（﹨）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
When my father bought a computer as birthday gift for me in last year, I
felt very excited. As is known to us all, computers are getting more and more
usefully now. Much information can be stored in it. We can also learn that
has happened lately in the world on the Internet. In the past, people had to do
lots of work that were very dangerous. But now computers can do it, instead. When an exam is coming, I often did some exercises in my computer. Then it will correct them and tell me the right answer. In this way it is very convenient for me to get ready for the exam than before.

书面表达（满分25分）

假设你是李华，作为交流学生去了澳大利亚三周。在此期间，你住在Tom家中，他们家为你提供了吃、住、行及旅游方面的帮助。请你给他写一封感谢信，主要内容如下：

1．表示感谢2．表达感受    3．欢迎来访4．保持联系

注意：1．词数100左右

      2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯

      3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(^),并在此符号下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词。
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第十一处起）不计分。
3.必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分。
Dear manager,
I am writing to tell you something that happened on me in your department store the other day . I came there to buy a shirt. I chose one and paid it. However, when I got to home with it, I found the front part and the back were of different colour. At once I went back to your store and hoping that I could have it change. Unlucky, the shop assistant refused to do that for me. She said that I must have chosen it more carefully. Now that I can only do is to write you for help. I believe you will try your best to settle the problem.
Jefferson

单词拼写（每小题1分，共10分）
【小题1】Luckily, he found supporting evidence from two other deaths l        to the cholera outbreak.（与。。。有关联）
【小题2】Much to our d       , Mary won the first prize in the competition.（高兴）              
【小题3】The manager will come back in ten minutes. M         you can read some magazines.  （在此期间）                                        
【小题4】Sorry I broke that beautiful bowl, but I didn’t do it d        . （故意）           
【小题5】If the injuries are second or third degree burns, it is v         to get the victim to the doctor or hospital.（至关重要的）
【小题6】T        (包容，忍受) each other’s shortcomings is supposed to be a good quality of a loyal friend.
【小题7】The interviewee’s excellent English made a very good first i        (印象) on us.
【小题8】Earnest Hemingway once said, “A man can be destroyed but not d________.          (打败).”  
【小题9】England and Wales were joined to Scotland in the 17^th century without c_____. (冲突).   
【小题10】“Oh, gosh! My nose is  b        (流血) .”