文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。请按下列情况改正：
此句话多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉， 在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。
此句话缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,在该句话右边写出该加的词。
此句话错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该词的下边写出改正后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；
2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
One afternoon on April, 1912, a new ship set off from England to America on it first trip. It was one of the largest and best ship at that time. It was cold, but the ship was pleasant and people are enjoying themselves. The next day was even cold. People could see icebergs here or there. It was night, suddenly, the man on watch shouting “look out! Iceberg!" It was too late, a ship hit the iceberg and came to a stop. There that was a very big hole in the ship and water began to come. Slowly the ship started to go down.

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。请按下列情况改正：

此句话多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉， 在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

此句话缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,在该句话右边写出该加的词。

此句话错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该词的下边写出改正后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

     2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One afternoon on April, 1912, a new ship set off from England to America on it first trip. It was one of the largest and best ship at that time. It was cold, but the ship was pleasant and people are enjoying themselves. The next day was even cold. People could see icebergs here or there. It was night, suddenly, the man on watch shouting “look out! Iceberg!" It was too late, a ship hit the iceberg and came to a stop. There that was a very big hole in the ship and water began to come. Slowly the ship started to go down.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。如有错误，则按下列情况改正：
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，并在起下面写出该加的词。
修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 至允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High
School. Last Saturday, the class that I was on held a
get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It
was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody
and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed
this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent
together and the people they were familiar with.It was
a pity which some of us were not present as they had
gone abroad for further studies, but they calls back
or sent greeting card from different places.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。如有错误，则按下列情况改正：

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合(^)，并在起下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划—横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 至允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

It is five years now since I graduate from No.3 High

School. Last Saturday, the class that I was on held a

get-together, which took us a long time prepare. It

was indeed not easy to get in the touch with everybody

and set a well time for all of us. We all enjoyed

this precious day greatly, remember the time we spent

together and the people they were familiar with.It was

a pity which some of us were not present as they had

gone abroad for further studies, but they calls back

or sent greeting card from different places.

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个勾（√）如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：

       删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。

       增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符合（^），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。

       修改：在错的词下划—横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。

       注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

       2．允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Johnson,

       I’ve learned from a newspaper that some clerks are wanting in your company．I am eager to being one of them．So I am writing the letter．My name is zhang Hua．I was born in the Hebei Province and I am in good health．I’ve just graduated in the Computer Department of Wuhan University．I did very good in all subjects and I am especial good at computer studies and English．I can read science books in English and doing some writing in English as well．

       Beside, I know a little French．And in my spare time, I enjoy playing basketball．As is said that your company is very famous and I’ll very glad if you let me work for it．My telephone number is 027-89276628．I am looking forward to hearing from you soon．