短文改错(共10小题；每小题1.5分，满分15分)
此题要求改正短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在答题卡相应的位置上画一个勾（P）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
此行多一个词：把多余的词写在答题卡相应的位置上，用斜线（\）划掉。
此行缺一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该加的词，并附带前（后）词。
此行错一个词：在答题卡相应的位置上写出该错词和改正后的词。
注意：原行没有错的不要改。
Hi Susan,
I’m sorry that I wasn’t able to return to your              76______
bike on time yesterday. I mean to give it                  77______
back to you before four in the afternoon, and I             78______
was hold up on my way back. Just before I                79______
turned corner of Park Street, I happened to                80______
see an accident. A little girl was hurt and her              81______
mother needed help. So I helped them going to             82______
the nearest hospital. I stayed here for one and              83_______
a half hour and made sure that the girl was all              84______
right. When I got back, it were already 6 pm. I             85_______
hope you understand.
Thank you!
Li Ling

第II卷（40分）
写作（共两节，满分40分）
第一节：短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
文中共有10处语言错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\）,并在该句下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Attentions, please. 0n Saturday evening there is a talk by a well-known America writer, Sura Jones. You may read her latest novel. It’s in all the bookshops at the moment. Well, a talk will be given at 8 pm on Saturday evening in the library. That’s the building next to Allen Hall,the English Department Building. Miss Jones has just returned back from Africa and will talk about all her experience there. She traveled through three different countries and meet lots of interesting people. Now I’d like to remind you that the talk is for everyone, not just to the fourth-years students. I’m sure the talk will be interesting and hope you all have great time.

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）,并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

         2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Should students make the friends online? Some people say yes. The Internet helps make many friends. Chatted online, students can express their feelings and opinions more free, and even get help with their foreign language studies.

Others, however, think students should not. They say make friends online is waste of time, which should be spending more meaningfully on study. Moreover, some students get cheat when they try to meet the friend they made online.

It is my opinion which students should place their study, health and safe before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find them in our classmates and other people around us.

短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误。对标有题号的每一行做出判断：每行只有一个错误，请按下列情况改正：该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。
注意：请在答题卡上作答。
Everyone can do anything for our environment. For me,    76．            
I should tried to save electricity in our daily life. For example, 77．            
if I am the last person leave the classroom in the evening,     78．            
I would always remember to turn off the lights. In order to     79．            
protect our forests, I will use paper wise. I should try  80．            
to use both side of paper whenever it is possible. I will 81．            
ride a bike to school instead of went in a private car,   82．            
because bikes do not pollute the air. I believe that by doing all   83．            
these small things will improve our environment but help  84．            
make our world the much better place to live in.         85．            
76.anything改为：something    77.tried→try。

第二节短文改错 (共10小题; 每小题1.5分, 满分15分)
此题要求改正所给短文中的错误. 对标有题号的每一行作出判断:如无错误,在该行右边横线上画一个勾(√); 如有错误(每行只有一个错误),则按下列情况改正:
此行多一个词: 把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉, 在该行右边横线上写出该词, 并也用斜线划掉.
此行缺一个词: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^), 在该行右边横线上写该加的词.
此行错一个词: 在错的词下划一横线, 在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词.
注意: 原行没有错的不要改.
Wang Feng doesn’t get along well with her father. It is            76____________
not because Wang Feng is not a good teenager. Actual,            77___________
he studies very hard and has several very good friend.            78____________
It is his father whom is hard to get along with. He always          79___________
thinks that he was the father and everyone in the family          80___________
should do what he consider right. He doesn’t want               81___________
wang Feng to read any books except that the textbooks. He never   82____________
allows him watch TV, even the news. And he doesn’t give         83___________
Wang Feng a chance to express his ideas.I don’t like such         84___________
a father. To my opinion, fathers should be like friends.           85 ___________