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18．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I was only 12since we moved to California．I remembered that I enjoyed flying non-stop across a whole country and that I wasn't very happy about leave my friends．But Dad think it would be good for us all to live in a suburb instead in the middle of a city．And Uncle Jeff，his brother，who'd been living in California for about 20years，were always telling us how wonderful California it was．He said it would be easily for Dad to get a job driving a taxi，that had been Dad's job in New York．Thus，we all agreed to try them for one year．

17．假定英语课上老师要求同桌中间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last weekend，I helped my grandparents prepare for our trip to Beidaihe．On Saturday morning，together with my grandparents，I searched for the Internet for the train schedule，the weather in Beidaihe，and some hotel informations．In the afternoon，I went to the train station and manage to buy two tickets for my grandparents but there was a long queue．After dinner，I packed into the suitcase which my grandparents would need，such as clothes，glasses，a umbrella，and a map．The next morning，I went to the station see them off．Waved goodbye to them on the platform，I felt happy for them and wished them a safety journey．

16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处，每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/\），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I've learnt from the notice that you're looking for an English editor for us school paper．I'm written this letter to apply the position．
I'm Li Hua，a Senior Three student in our school．In my view，I met your requirements：for one thing，I'm willing to devote some of my spare time to serve others； for another，I'm good at both English or Fine Arts．I'm either skilled in using computers．I would be glad if you could offer to me an opportunity for an interview．
I'm looking forward to your kindly reply at your earliest convenient．

15．Equipped （配备） with new scientific farming methods，they have been able to use less farmland than in the past．

14．Anne described how she got into anargument （争论） with one of the waiters about the bill．

13．Many people prefer airplanes when （61）taking（take） a long trip．For others，cruise ships offer the best choice．However，for some travelers，the only way to（62）truly（true） experience a country is traveling overland by motorcycle，train（63）or    hitchhiking （免费搭便车）．
Kevin and Julia Sanders are two well-known overland travelers．In 35days they rode by motorcycle from Alaska to the tip of South America，（64）a journey of 20，000miles across 14countries．Kevin believes that traveling by bike gives people more （65）freedom  （free） because you never have to worry （66）about/over bus or train schedules．Instead you can organize your time the way you want．
If you prefer to travel in a little more comfortable，trains are another popular overland choice．The train offers travelers the opportunity （67）to communicate （communicate） with locals．
For the adventurous，hitchhiking can be an exciting way to see a country．Hitchhiking can be quite （68）dangerous  （danger） and is not advised in many countries，but when（69）it  is safe to do so，travelers love it．Hitchhikers often learn things that cannot （70）be found（find） in travel guides．

12．I was telling my boy Sonny the story of the hare and the tortoise．At the end I said，"Son，remember：Be slow and steady（61）and you will win the race．Don't you think there's something to learn （62）from the tortoise？"
Sonny opened his eyes wide，"Do you mean next time when I'm entering for the 60-metre race I should wish that Billy，Tony and Sandy would all fall asleep halfway？"I was （63）shocked（shock），"But the tortoise didn't wish that the hare would fall asleep!"
"He must have wished that，"Sonny said．"Otherwise how could he be so foolish as to race with the hare？He knew very （64）well （good） the hare ran a hundred times faster than he （65）himself （him） did．"
"He didn't have such （66）a wish，"I insisted．"He won the race by perseverance and by pushing on（67）steadily （steady）．"
Sonny（68）thought （think） for a while．"That's a lie，"he said．"He won it because he was lucky．If the hare hadn't happened（69）to fall （fall） asleep，the tortoise would never have won the race．He could be as steady as you like，but he'd never have won the race．That's for sure．"
I gave up．Today's children are not like（70）what we used to be．

11．He wants to find an occupation with a fat salary and a friendly working environment..

10．This table mat is ten square centimeters，and you can get a dozen for only one dollar．

9．The origin of Chinese culture dates back to more than 5000years ago..

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