8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其——青夏教育精英家教网——

8．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分
On January 5th，students in our school visited Robot World，which we saw a great number of robot．It was amazed to find those robots could do a lot of things just like real people，included playing chess，playing the piano and drawing pictures．What's more，the robots were in different kinds and shapes，which made us enjoyable．In addition，that excited me most is the show given by a group of robots．They danced just as if they were dancers on the stage．By visiting Robot World，I have learned a lot of about robots，especial about their functions and shapes．The great human wisdom is so powerful that it make us feel more comfortable live in the world．

7．Animals have been killed for their fur and feathers，and （61）thousands （thousand） of kinds of animals have disappeared from the world forever．About 170kinds in the US alone （62）are considered （consider） in danger．
Why should people care？（63）Becausewe need animals，and if they are gone，there will never be any more．Every animal has its place in the balance of nature．（64）Destroying （destroy） one kind of animal can create many problems．For example，when farmers killed large numbers of hawks （老鹰），the farmers'stores of corn and grain were destroyed （65）by rats and mice．With no hawks to keep down their numbers，the rats and mice multiplied （繁殖）（66）quickly．（quick）．
Luckily，some people are working （67）to help （help） save the animals．Some groups raise money to let people know about （68）the problem．And they try to get the governments to pass laws protecting animals in danger．Quite a few （69）countries （country） have passed laws．These laws forbid the killing of any animals on the danger list．Slowly，the number of some animals in danger（70）is （be） growing．

6．Several weeks ago I was at a bus station in California waiting in line to buy a ticket．As I stood there I saw a little boy （71）begging （beg） people for money so that he could buy his breakfast．Most of the travelers simply ignored the little boy or gave him a dirty look，（72）but/yet a well-dressed middle-aged man reacted differently．When（73）approached （approach） by the little boy，the gentleman looked at him and （74）quietly （quiet） asked，"How much will you need？"I could't hear what the little boy said but watched as the gentleman pulled several notes from his wallet and calmly placed （75）them in the little boy's hands．
I don't know （76）whether the little boy actually used the money for his breakfast or for other （77）purposes （purpose）．What I do know is that I witnessed two different reactions （78）tothe same situation．I saw people who were either afraid or annoyed．And then I saw the gentleman who was not afraid and treated the homeless little boy as though he were a brother．I decided then and there that，even though we have to be （79）careful （care） in this world，I would rather I （80）behaved （behave） like the gentleman，choosing to trust what is beautiful．

5．Sometimes our emotions can seem to defeat us．When this happens，（61）it is possible to give people the wrong impression or do something we regret．Learning to express your emotions effectively will allow you（62）to communicate （communicate） clearly and carefully，without hurting those around you or （63）making （make） the situation worse．So it's important to learn to express emotions．
Firstly，you need to learn how to express your angry feelings．Anger can cause you to say things you regret，（64）so sometimes you should control your angry feelings．If you're afraid of saying something that hurts someone，then try to think carefully before you speak．Also，you（65）can write down your angry thoughts as if you were shouting it out to the world．This allows you to express your anger．
（66）Secondly，it's necessary to learn to express sadness．Sadness is particularly hard to deal with，especially when people can see you are sad．But you needn't hide it．Instead，try talking about （67）what is making you sad．It doesn't matter if you cry，as it（68）has proved （prove） that crying can reduce stress．What's more，if you feel your secrets are safe in your dairy，then write down what is upsetting you．
Learning to express worry is also important．If you're worried about a friend or a loved one，（69）talk（talk） to them about your worry．This could give you some peace of mind．Also，you can choose an activity（70）that/whichyou are interested in and spend some time doing it．The less you think about the problem，the less you will worry．

4．Jack and I went fishing yesterday morning．Jack kept on catching fish，but I just sat there waiting （61）forsome fish to bite my line．After（62）he had caught five fish，I only caught a small fish．（63）Looking at my fish，I didn't feel （64）comfortable（舒服）．But later on，I finally felt a fish was biting my line．I（65）thoughtthat it was going to be a big fish for I had a hard （66）time bringing it up．Finally it turned out to be an old （67）shoe（鞋），which was pretty funny．Both
of us began to laugh（68）loudly．Before we went home，I only caught two fish （69）while Jack had nine fish．Although we were （70）tired（疲倦） out，we felt very happy．

3．How to take food pictures
When mouth-watering food on a white plate （51）is served（serve） to you，do you eat it right away？Chances are that you （52）actually（actual） take a photo first，then post（53）it on your favorite social networking sites and apps．
Shooting food has become a popular practice for people all over the world．Last month，The Telegraph newspaper published an article from a British food（54）photographer（photograph），Hugh Johnson，in which he shared tips．Read on to find out how to get （55）better（good） at taking food pictures．
Don't overcrowd （把…塞满） the shot．
Don't try and put too much in a single picture．Zoom in（放大镜头） on its front edge or focus（56）on a key area，such as an egg yolk or a steak's pink center，but not so close （57）that a viewer won't be able to tell what it is．
Consider the lighting．
Natural light can always make your food photos look great．（58）（use） a flash in a darker restaurant will get rid of a lot of your food's features and colors．（59）A plate will always look better in natural light，（60）butwhen sunshine is impossible，make sure you use as much of the available light as possible，or try and use the shadow（阴影） to your advantage．

2．Would you do me a favor/avour and hand me the book there？

1．Paper books will never be replaced by e-books．

20．He only charged me half price for repairing the bike．

19．Smoking is forbidden in our school．

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