题目内容
9."Happiness Shared"was title of an e-mail I received from a website that I really enjoyed.It inspired me to contacting two friends and invite him over for a craft day.I was excited about sharing craft ideas and baking cookies with friend!Then one friend sent me a message saying that she was depressing and thought she should not come,so she would only bring us down.I sent her a quote what inspires me when I'm upset.It is,"Think about how you want to feel and do whatever it takes to make it to happen."Finally,she comes and we had a great day.It is so nicely to have someone to share your day with!分析 本文作者通过描述自己邀请两位朋友与其一起分享手工制作以及烘焙曲奇的经历,旨在说明能与别人一起分享快乐是一件美好的事情.
解答 "Happiness Shared"was∧title of an e-mail I received from a website
that I really enjoyed.It inspired me to contacting two friends and
invite him over for a craft day.I was excited about sharing craft ideas
and baking cookies with friend!Then one friend sent me a message saying
that she was depressing and thought she should not come,so she would
only bring us down.I sent her a quote what inspires me when I'm upset.
It is,"Think about how you want to feel and do whatever it takes to make
it to happen."Finally,she comes and we had a great day.It is so nicely
to have someone to share your day with!
详解:
1.在title前加the 考查定冠词 此处用在名词title之前,表示特指我收到的一封电子邮件的标题;故在title前加定冠词the.
2.contacting改为contact 考查固定短语 inspire sb.to do sth.意为:鼓励某人做某事;此处用在动词不定式符号to之后作宾语补足语,应使用动词原形;故用contact.
3.him改为them 考查人称代词 此处在句中作动词invite的宾语,指代的是two friends;故用them.
4.friend改为friends 考查名词的单复数 根据上文提到作者想邀请两位朋友来参加一个手工制作的活动,可知此处指的应是那两位朋友;故用friends.
5.depressing改为depressed 考查由过去分词转化来的形容词 此处在句中作表语,用来说明主语she(指人)的情况,故用由过去分词转化来的形容词depressed.
6.so改为because 考查句意理解及从属连词 本句的意思是:之后,其中的一个朋友给我发了一条信息,说她很沮丧,认为她不应该来,因为她只会让我们失望;此处用来引导原因状语从句,故用连词because.
7.what改为that/which 考查关系代词 本句是定语从句,由于先行词 a quote (引用的话)在该从句中作主语,故用关系代词that/which.
8.去掉happen之前的to 考查固定结构 make sth.do意为:让某物做某事;其中的sth与动词do构成的是主动关系;这里指的是:让它发生;故去掉happen之前的to.
9.comes改为came 考查时态 根据上文以及连词and之后"we had a great day"使用了一般过去时可知,本文描述的是过去发生的事情,故用came.
10.nicely改为nice 考查形容词 此处用在系动词is之后作表语,故用形容词nice.
点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题,主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力.错误类型一般有:缺词、多词和错词.常见的错误有:1 词法错误,主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面.解答此类试题时,需要正确分析句子成分,熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等.2 常见句法错误.通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误.解答此类试题时,需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法.3 应在理解文章大意的前提下,进行作答.
A. | nearly | B. | slight | C. | narrowly | D. | lightly |