Question

19．你的美国笔友Lucy来信告知她寒假期间将来京旅游，打算买几个风筝作为纪念品（souvenir）带回美国．请你根据以下提示给Lucy写回信．
1．表示欢迎；
2．就她购买纪念品的计划说说你的看法；
3．推荐一个你认为最值得参观的古迹，并说明原因．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Lucy，
I learned about your plan from your mail．                                           
Best wishes!
Sincerely Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一封回信，对笔友Lucy来中国旅游表示欢迎．写作要点包括：1．表示欢迎；2．就她购买纪念品的计划说说你的看法；3．推荐一个你认为最值得参观的古迹，并说明原因．写作时人称以第一和第三人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主．
重要词汇：learn about （了解）；souvenir（纪念品）；a good idea（好主意）；represent（代表）；as for （至于）； pay a visit to（参观）；used to（过去常常）；have a good time （玩的高兴）；look forward to （期待，渴望）
高分句型：As for your tour in Beijing，I suggest ①you pay a visit to the Forbidden City，②which used to
be the Palace ③while the emperors ruled China．
                 ①suggest引导一个宾语从句时，从句结构用should+动词原形，should可以省略；②which引导一个非限制性定语从句，关系代词which指代先行词the Forbidden City；③while引导一个时间状语从句．

解答 Dear Lucy，
I learned about your plan from your mail．Welcome to Beijing!I'm so happy that I can see you soon．You said you're going to buy several kites as souvenir．I think that's a good idea．Kites were invented in China．They represent Chinese culture．As for your tour in Beijing，I suggest you pay a visit to the Forbidden City，which used to be the Palace while the emperors ruled China．（高分句型）I believe you will be amazed by the ancient buildings there．
I hope you'll have a good time during your stay in Beijing．Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Best wishes!
                                                   Sincerely Yours，
                                                         Li Hua

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意要点的提炼要全，关键短语和句型要写对，准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，还要注意人称和时态使用要正确．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．