Question

1．为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了"HEART-TO-HEART"专栏．假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信．信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响．请用英文给该同学写一封回信．
内容要点如下：
1）表示理解并给予安慰；
2）提出建议并说明理由．
注意：
1）词数120左右；
2）信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；
3）信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数．
参考词汇：temper n．脾气，情绪
Hi Worried．：
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a had time at the moment．     ．
Yours，
Jamie．

Answer 1

分析 本作文为应用文，按照Worried写的求助信写一封回信，根据信中提到的困扰表示理解和安慰，并提出建议并给出理由．，属于提纲作文．在写作时，时态为一般现在时．人称以第三人称为主．重要短语：control your temper（控制脾气）；a good way of （…的好方法），let out（释放），get rid of （消除），carry on （继续进行），lift your spirits（振奋精神）．

解答 Hi  Worried，
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment．The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong，so you don't have to worry so much．【高分句型】The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret．【高分句型】（理解与安慰）Here are three useful tips：
 First，talk to someone you trust about how you feel．This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself．Second，go outdoors and play games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger．And third，remain optimistic about your future．Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits．（建议与理由）
 I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal．
 Yours，
 Jamie

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．