Question

19．假如你是学生李华，于2016 年3 月12 日植树节，参加了学校组织的高一、高二学生徒步10公里到东钱湖植树活动．就此活动，请用英语写一篇日记，并谈谈你的感受．
注意：1．词数100 左右；
    2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯；
    3．不能泄露自己的真实信息（如：姓名和校名）．
（参考词汇：徒步vi．hike   植树节 Tree-Planting Day）
Mar.12^th，2016
                                                

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）Talking and laughing happily，we set off for Dongqian Lake on foot in the morning．
该句使用了talking and laughing现在分词做状语，表示伴随状况，表示出发时候的状态；
（高分句型二）Having covered a distance of 10 kilometers，we finally arrived at the destination．
having covered是非谓语表达，we和cover之间是主动关系，表示时间状语；
（高分句型三）After that，we walked around and did some sightseeing，during which，I took many photos．
该句使用了介词+which的非限制性定语从句，during表示在此期间；
高级词汇：set off出发；cover指走过多少路程；arrived at the destination到达目的地；
upon+doing固定短语，一…就…；It's the first time that 表示第一次做某事；raised my awareness of the importance 提高意识…；
考生需注意：在叙述植树事情的时候，要使用一般过去时，在表达自己感受时，需 用一般现在时；

解答 （该段叙述植树活动内容）Today is the National Tree-planting Day．Students of Senior Grade One and Two had a special spring-outing （spring excursion）．（高分句型一）Talking and laughing happily，we set off for Dongqian Lake on foot in the morning．（高分句型二）Having covered a distance of 10 kilometers，we finally arrived at the destination．Upon arriving there，we began to dig holes，plant trees and water the ones we planted．（高分句型三）After that，we walked around and did some sightseeing，during which，I took many photos．
    （表达自己的感受）It's the first time that I have walked so long and taken part in such an environmentally-friendly tour．The beautiful scenery raised my awareness of the importance to protect the environment，while planting trees helped me better understand my classmates and learn to cooperate better．I am glad I have done my part．

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