Question

6．假如你是李华，你的好友王伟来信说他在高中英语学习过程中遇到一些困难，英语考试成绩不理想，感到很苦恼，希望你就如何学好英语给他提些建议，要求内容包括以下几点．
1．利用课余时间多听多读以增加词汇量；
2．熟悉掌握每单元的重要句型；
3．一旦遇到疑难问题多与老师同学交流；
4．不向困难屈服．
参考词汇：句型sentence patterns
注意：⒈词数100左右，首尾句已为你写好，不计入总词数；⒉可以适当增加细节，以便行文连贯；⒊答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上．
Dear Wang Wei，
I'm sorry to learn that you are feeling sad because you have some trouble in learning English．                                        
I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．

Answer 1

分析 考查提纲类短文写作．本文的中心思想是希望对方提出一些高中英语学习的建议，要点在文字提示部分都已经给了出来，考生要做的就是把他们翻译成英语．在写作的过程指要选择适当高级的自己能够驾驭的词汇和句型来提高文章的层次；
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：同时运用合适的连接词把文章连接成一个整体，for one thing，for another； besides，firstly，secondly，last but not least等．
I'd like to give you some advice on how to learn English well．（高分句型一）
It's widely believed that practice makes perfect．（高分句型二）
Only in this way can you learn English well．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Wang Wei，
       I'm sorry to learn that you are feeling sad because you have some difficulty in learning English．What's worse，you do badly in the English exams．I'd like to give you some advice on how to learn English well．（高分句型一）
       Firstly，you should make full use of your spare time to do more listening and reading about English to increase vocabulary．It's widely believed that practice makes perfect．（高分句型二）Secondly，if you want to improve your writing，you should have a good command of important sentence patterns of each unit．Thirdly，once you come across problems，you can turn to your teachers and classmates for help．Lastly，never give in to any difficulties．Only in this way can you learn English well．（高分句型三）
       I hope you will find these suggestions helpful．
       Best wishes
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  LiHua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．