Question

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

Miss Brown,

We have received your application last week. We regret to informing you that our company has hired other girl for the job of secretary. Having careful studied your certificate, we decided that we should need someone with more office’s experience for this particular position. You have impressed us，but, with your desire to learn and your ability to work hard, we do hope that you will apply a position in our company sometimes in the future. We would like to thank you for your interesting in our company. Please contact to us if there are any further questions.

                                                                   Yours，

                                                                   John Smith

Answer 1

Miss Brown,

We have received your application last week. We regret to informing you that our company

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has hired other girl for the job of secretary. Having careful studied your certificate, we decided

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that we should need someone with more office’s experience for this particular position. You

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have impressed us，but, with your desire to learn and your ability to work hard, we do hope that

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you will apply∧ a position in our company sometimes in the future. We would like to thank

for                    sometime

you for your interesting in our company. Please contact to us if there are any further questions.

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Yours，

                                                         John Smith

解析:

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