题目内容
6．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Yesterday，it was just on the point of big shopping this season．Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt．When she got there，she refused．The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt．Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left．Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her．They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful．Many eyes were staring at her，what made Li Mei very embarrassing．Luckily，a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go．
分析 本文讲述了Li Mei去商场退换衣服的经历，售货员告诉她只有拿来收据才能退换，Li Mei离开时却被门口的两名保安查住了，他们仔细检查她包里的衣服，Li Mei很尴尬，幸亏售货员及时赶来，她才得以离开．
解答 Yesterday，it was just on the point of big shopping this season．Li Mei goes to a store to return a shirt without carrying the receipt．When she got there，she∧refused．The salesman said that he wouldn't take it back if she showed him the receipt．Thinking it was no way out，Li Mei put the shirt back in her bag and left．Suddenly two shop guard stopped her and began to search for her．They found the shirt in the bag and looked at it careful．Many eyes were staring at her，what made Li Mei very embarrassing．Luckily，a salesman came up in time and she was allowed to go．
详解：
1．goes改为went；考查动词的时态，前面的时间状语是yesterday，是一般过去时的时间状语，所以这里使用一般过去时．
2．refused前面加was；考查动词的语态，主语she与动词refuse是动宾关系，故加was构成被动语态．
3．if改为unless；考查连词，根据句意说明这里指如果她不带着收据，对方是不会收回的，故用unless表示"除非"．
4．it改为there；考查固定句式，此处用there构成there be句型．
5．guard改为guards；考查名词单复数，前面有two修饰，说明这里使用复数形式．
6．去掉for；考查动词短语，固定搭配search sb搜某人的身．Search for…寻找…
7．careful改为carefully；考查副词，本句使用副词carefully修饰动词短语look at it．
8．what改为which；考查定语从句，本句是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前面一句话的内容在句中做主语．What不能引导定语从句．
9．embarrassing改为embarrassed；考查分词作形容词，现在分词做形容词修饰物，过去分词做形容词修饰人，此处修饰Li Mei，故用过去分词形式．
10．a改为the；考查冠词，这里的salesman指代上文提到的，故用the表示特指．
点评 快速阅读短文了解基本大意，运用语言基础知识从词类变化，句型结构，句群关系，固定搭配等方面对短文进行分析判断，找出错误加以修改．
