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13．目前我国中学生的健康状况越来越差，这使父母、学校和专家感到忧虑．为解决这一问题，有些人提出将体育纳入高考．请结合实际谈谈你的看法．
注意：①文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；  ②可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；③词数100左右．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇关于我国中学生的健康状况越来越差话题的作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一 说明我国中学生的健康状况越来越差的现状和将体育纳入高考的建议；二表达自己的看法和建议．
高分句型：
1．The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts．句子里that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health 是主语The fact 的同位语从句；has aroused 是主句的谓语动词，表示"激起"．
目前我国高中学生的健康状况越来越差，这个事实使父母、学校和专家感到忧虑．
2．It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field．句子里It做形式主语，代指动词不定式 to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field；far beyond our ability 表示"远远超出我们的能力范围"．
在体育场上完成全国范围的体育测试是远远超出我们的能力范围的．

解答 The fact that high school students are currently experiencing a sharp decline in health has aroused wide concern among parents，schools and experts．【高分句型一】To have this problem solved，some people propose that PE be included as a subject in the College Entrance Examination．（说明我国中学生的健康状况越来越差的现状和将体育纳入高考的建议）
I'm against the idea because it is by no means practical．Setting up standards for the exam alone may well be a hard task．It is far beyond our ability to manage such a nationwide exam in the sports field．【高分句型二】However，good health is an essential foundation of learning．Only when one is in good health can he guarantee efficient learning．Therefore，it is schools'responsibility to help develop their students'awareness of the importance of keeping fit．Moreover，schools should provide sufficient sports facilities for their students to have regular exercise．（表达自己的看法和建议）

点评 考查开放类作文．
写作时，在体裁明确、中心突出、要点清晰的前提下，应该选择自己最熟悉、最有把握的词语、句型，将要点逐条表达出来．表达时应该综合运用所掌握的知识，避开生僻的词汇，并克服母语的干扰，按照英语的习惯方式，用地道的英语表达出来，力求做到语言准确无误．