英语课上.老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文．假设以下小作文为你同桌所写.请你对其进行修改．文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧).并在此符号下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:1．每处错误及其修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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12．英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文．假设以下小作文为你同桌所写，请你对其进行修改．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在此符号下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词．
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
3．必须按答题要求做题，否则不给分．
Henry likes fish in the river near our house．Once Henry caught a big fish and he was very exciting!All the other fishermen left their place and came to see his fish．One of whom had a camera and he took a picture of Henry with a big fish．One day，Henry fell into the river．The grass was slippery because there had some mud on it．While he was pulled his line，he slipped and fall into the dirty water．Henry could not swim，but the two nearest fishermen pulled him at once．He ran to home，with mud all over his clothes and face．

分析本段文字讲述了Henry喜欢去河边钓鱼，有一次不慎掉入河里，然后被人解救的故事．

解答 Henry likes fish in the river near our house．Once Henry caught a big fish and he was very exciting!All the
                 fishing                                                                                                         excited
other fishermen left their place and came to see his fish．One of whom had a camera and he took a picture of
                                     places                                                them
Henry with a big fish．One day，Henry fell into the river．The grass was slippery because there hadsome mud on
                 the                                                                                                                       was
it．While he was pulled his line，he slipped and fall into the dirty water．Henry could not swim，but the two nearest
                         pulling                                 fell
fishermen pulled him∧at once．He ran to home，with mud all over his clothes and face．
                              out                     去掉
1．fish→fishing 考查非谓语动词．动词like后面跟v-ing形式表"（经常或习惯性地）喜欢做某事"，如果跟fish表示喜欢鱼，不符合情景．
2．exciting→excited 考查形容词．这里指人很兴奋，要用过去分词转化的形容词形式．
3．place→places  考查名词的单复数．根据前面的their可知，这里要用名词的复数．
4．whom→them 考查代词．根据句意和句子成分分析可知，这里是一个简单句，不是一个定语从句，故要用one of them而不用one of whom．
5．a→the 前文已经提及，后文再次提到，要用定冠词the．
6．had→was 考查there be句型，there be句型表示"…有…"，但是，be动词不能用have的形式表达．
7．pulled→pulling  考查动词的时态语态．根据，这里表示"他正要放…突然"，表进行不表被动，故把pulled改为pulling．
8．fall→fell 考查动词的时态．根据全文的时态可确定故事发生在过去，要用过去的时态．
9．him后加out   考查介词的固定搭配．表示"把…从…拉出来"要用pull sb．out （of）…
10．去掉介词to 考查副词．副词的前面不能有介词，故删掉home前面的介词to．

点评 1．由及物动词的现在分词或过去分词转化成的形容词用法：现在分词（v-ing），修饰物，表示"令人感到…的"；过去分词（v-ed）修饰人，表示"感到…的"
2．like to do/doing的区别：
like to do sth．意为"（偶尔或具体地）喜欢做某事"
like doing sth．意为"（经常或习惯地）喜欢做某事"