题目内容
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
The another day,I went to my house from work.I had been laid and began to think how to support my family.While I was walked up to my doorstep,I saw an elderly women with a young child.It was clear that the child was cold and had nothing with to cover her body except for a tearing shirt.I ran into the house and took one of my daughter's jackets and gave them to the elderly woman and she kind said thank you and walked away.Suddenly I came across a wealth man in my town.He loved to see generosity like that and offered me job and I have been working there since then.
分析 本文讲述了一个人们互相有爱的故事.
我被解雇了,在出门去找工作的时候,碰到一个老太太带着一个孩子,孩子的裙子破了,我送给她一件我女儿的衣服,她很感激我,这一幕让一位老板看见,他提供给我一份工作.
解答 The another day,I went to my house from work.I had been laid∧and began to think how to support my family.While I was walked up to my doorstep,I saw an elderly women with a young child.It was clear that the child was cold and had nothing with to cover her body except for a tearing shirt.I ran into the house and took one of my daughter's jackets and gave them to the elderly woman and she kind said thank you and walked away.Suddenly I came across a wealth man in my town.He loved to see generosity like that and offered me∧job and I have been working there since then.
解析:
1.another改为other.考查代词辨析.根据I went to my house from work 可知这是发生在过去的事,所以时间状语用The other day表示"几天以前".
2.laid 后加off.考查介词.本句表示"我已经被解雇了",所以用lay off 表示"解雇".
3.walked改为walking.考查动词的时态和语态.While I was walked up to my doorstep应该表示"当我走向门口的时候",所以用过去进行时,因此用 was walking.
4.women改为woman.考查名词.根据修饰词an可知用单数woman.
5.去掉with.考查介词.固定句式have nothing to do 表示"没有东西做某事",所以去掉with.
6.tearing改为torn.考查单词辨析.修饰名词shirt,表示"破了的裙子"用torn.
7.them改为it.考查代词.代指 one of my daughter's jackets 用it.
8.kind改为kindly.考查形容词和副词的辨析.修饰 动词 said 用副词kindly.
9.wealth改为wealthy.考查派生词.修饰名词man用形容词wealthy.
10.job 前加个a.考查冠词.修饰可数名词job,表示"一份工作",应该用a.
点评 考查短文改错.
形容词(adjective),简称adj.或a,形容词用来修饰名词或代词,表示人或事物的性质、状态,和特征的程度好坏与否,形容词在句中作定语、表语、宾语补足语.通常,可将形容词分成性质形容词和叙述形容词两类,其位置不一定都放在名词前面. 例如本题的9,用wealthy修饰名词.