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2．最近我国多地出现雾霾（haze）天气，人们甚至必须戴口罩外出．公众对当前环境状况表示高度担忧．请你根据以下要点给校报写一篇稿件，要点如下：
（1）人们对雾霾的关注；
（2）分析雾霾形成的原因；（如：工业污染，交通污染等）
（3）提出治理雾霾的建议．
注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Recently，the air quality in China has raised widespread concern．The Air Quality Index in most parts reached 500．Everything around disappeared from our sight．Some highways were closed．（高分句型一） More traffic jams and accidents happened．People had to wear masks．What's worse，many people found it difficult to breathe．
The heavy hazy weather in China has been caused by many factors．First，the severely polluted environment contributed a lot to this nightmare．Second，the increase of cars in the city area plays an important role．The cars send off a lot of poisonous gases．
In my opinion，We should call on people to use more public transport，thus reducing the number of cars in the streets．（高分句型二） Besides，some factories which cause pollution should be closed down．What's more，We have to do more to raise people's awareness of environmental protection．Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days．（高分句型三）．

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分析 本题主要是围绕雾霾向英语报社投稿，属于典型的议论文模式，即影响+原因+建议，可参考固定的写作模板，建议采用三段论结构．范文采用经典的三段论结构，第一段阐述影响，第二段阐述原因，第三段提出建议．第三段第一句We should call on people to use more public transport，thus reducing the number of cars in the streets．thus在此处作副词，后句是一个动词ing形式作结果状语；第三段第二句some factories which cause pollution should be closed down使用了which引导的定语从句；最后一句Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days使用了only引导的倒装句．本文使用了许多短语：What's worse更糟的是，contribute to导致，play an important role起重要作用，send off散发，call on号召，What's more还有．本文在词语使用也颇具特色，如第二段使用了First …second…首先…其次…，最后一段使用了副词Besides此外，使得文章流畅自然．总结：在陈述原因时，可套用格式First …second…last but not least…或Firstly…secondly…

解答 Recently，the air quality in China has raised widespread concern．The Air Quality Index in most parts reached 500．Everything around disappeared from our sight．Some highways were closed．（高分句型一） More traffic jams and accidents happened．People had to wear masks．What's worse，many people found it difficult to breathe．
     The heavy hazy weather in China has been caused by many factors．First，the severely polluted environment contributed a lot to this nightmare．Second，the increase of cars in the city area plays an important role．The cars send off a lot of poisonous gases．
     In my opinion，We should call on people to use more public transport，thus reducing the number of cars in the streets．（高分句型二） Besides，some factories which cause pollution should be closed down．What's more，We have to do more to raise people's awareness of environmental protection．Only in this way can we expect to have more sunny days．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．