Question

10．假定你是李华，有一个好朋友叫王刚，进入高三后，他的学习压力越来越大，常常熬夜，而白天却打不起精神来听课，学习成绩每况愈下，为此他很痛苦，写信求助于你．你写一封信给他，提出一些自我调整的建议．
注意：1．词数：100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Wang Gang，
Dear WangGang，
I'm sorry to hear that you have great trouble in your study in Senior Three．You are not the only one who feels nervous but ends up with staying up at night．Many of you of course feel sleepy during the daytime，thus your grades fall．I'm sure you know that it's terrible to continue this situation because you might be left far behind．
Don't worry too much．It's no use worrying all the time．You can adjust yourself by listening to some music in your spare time during the weekend．Never stay up again because it reduces the effect of listening to the teacher at daytime．In the face of pressure，what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or turn to the teachers for advice if necessary．Anyway，Rome was not built in a day．Only by keeping high spirits persistently can we make progress step by step till success．I firmly hope I can be of some help to you．
Yours truly，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放类作文，我们需要用英语把给出的要点准确的表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．写作时使用第一人称，用一般现在时．内容要点要针对王刚的困惑提出具体的有指导性的建议．

重要短语：have great trouble in（在…有麻烦），feel nervous（感到紧张），end up with sth（以某事而结束），feel sleepy（犯困），leave behind（落后），in the face of（面临），calm down（镇静想，镇定），reflect sth（反思某事），make changes（作变化），turn to sb for advice（向某人寻求建议），keep high spirits（保持高昂的士气），make progress（取得进步），step by step（一步一步的），be of some help to sb（对某人有帮助）．
【高分句型一】
1．You are not the only one who feels nervous but ends up with staying up at night．
此处是由关系代词"who"引导的定语从句，先行词为"the only one"，关系代词"who"在定语从句中做主语．
【高分句型二】
2．I'm sure you know①that ②it's terrible to continue this situation because you might be left far behind．
  ①此处是由"that"引导的宾语从句，主句为"I'm sure you know"．
 ②此处是由形式主语"it"引导的主语从句，结构为"It+be+形容词+to do sth"
【高分句型三】
3．①what we need to do is②to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or turn to the teachers for advice．
①此处是由疑问代词"what"引导的主语从句，"what"在从句中作主语，谓语动词用单数．
②此处是由三个不定式"to do"作表语，"and"后面的是省略了"to"的动词不定式（表示并列关系的两个或多个不定式可以省略"to"）．
【高分句型四】
4．I firmly hope I can be of some help to you．
 此处是由省略了"that"的宾语从句，主句为"I firmly hope"．

解答 Dear Wang Gang，
I'm sorry to hear that you have great trouble in your study in Senior Three．You are not the only one who feels nervous but ends up with staying up at night．【高分句型一】Many of you of course feel sleepy during the daytime，thus your grades fall．I'm sure you know that it's terrible to continue this situation because you might be left far behind．【高分句型二】（消极行为可能带来的不良后果）
 Don't worry too much．It's no use worrying all the time．You can adjust yourself by listening to some music in your spare time during the weekend．Never stay up again because it reduces the effect of listening to the teacher at daytime．In the face of pressure，what we need to do is to calm down and reflect our learning methods and make some possible changes or turn to the teachers for advice if necessary．【高分句型三】Anyway，Rome was not built in a day．Only by keeping high spirits persistently can we make progress step by step till success．I firmly hope I can be of some help to you．【高分句型四】（结合自身实际提出应采取的积极态度和应对方法）

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