Question

写作

假设你是李华。5月11日是母亲节，你的美国朋友Sandy问你在这一天有何打算。请你根据以下提示，给她写一封回信，谈谈你要做的事情，并简单说明原因。开头与结尾已写好，不计入总词数。

1．帮助母亲做家务；

2．送礼物；

3．写贺卡。

要求：100字左右。

Dear Sandy,

I'm very glad to receive your letter．_______________________________

Have you got any other ideas? Look forward to your reply．

Best wishes．

Yours truly,

Li Hua

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One possible version： Dear Sandy, 　　I'm very glad to receive your letter．In your letter, you asked me what I would do on Mother's Day．Here I would like to tell you something about my plan． 　　Firstly, I think I should help my mum do some housework, such as tidying the rooms or washing some clothes, for I am very thankful for all the work she has done for me．Secondly, I would like to send her some flowers as a gift, wishing her to be much younger and happier．Thirdly, I am going to write her a card, telling her how much she means to me and that I'll try my best to live up to her expectations． 　　Have you got any other ideas? Look forward to your reply． 　　Best wishes． Yours truly, Li Hua 　　评分标准：本题总分为20分，评分时可按五档进行。 　　◇第一档：(20～17分) 　　能写明全部或绝大部分要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚；书写规范工整。 　　◇第二档：(16～14分) 　　能写明绝大部分要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达清楚。 　　◇第三档：(13～12分) 　　能写明大部分要点；语言有部分错误；表达基本清楚。 　　◇第四档：(11～6分) 　　能写出部分要点；语言有较多错误；表达欠完整，但尚能达意；全文至少有2～3个句子可读。 　　◇第五档：(5～0分) 　　行文表达不清楚，只写出个别单词、词组或短语；只有一个句子可读。 　　注意：1．评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言表达初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。 　　2．词数少于100或多于150的，从总分中减去2分。 　　3．考虑拼写及标点符号的准确性；英美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。 　　4．如书写较差或有较多涂抹(4处涂抹扣1分)，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。