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假如你是高三学生李平。最近，你了解到你校高一年级正在进行课改。现在，请你给英语校刊写信，内容包括如下:
1.羡慕高一学生及缘由；
2. 自己感到遗憾的方面；
3. 课改对学生的益处；
4. 给高一学生的建议；
5. 学校在课改中应注意之处。
注意: 1 次数100左右。信的开头和结尾已给出，并不计入总词数。
2. 可适当增加细节，使行文流畅。
3. 参考词汇:the Curriculum Reform课改
Dear Editor,
  I am Li Ping, a senior three student in our school. Recently I have learned that the Curriculum Reform is being carried out in Senior One of our school,
Wish the Curriculum Reform a success!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping

Answer 1

Dear Eidtor,
I am Li Ping, a senior three student in our school. Recently, I have learned that the Curriculum Reform is being carried out in Senior One of our school, and I can’t help admiring those lucky students, for they’ve got the chance to choose to study what they like. But to my regret, I had no choice but to learn what was provided by the school when I was in Senior One. Even so, I still feel that the Curriculum Reform will certainly benefit students’ future development in a long term. From this aspect, I strongly advise them to make good use of this opportunity to develop themselves. Meanwhile, I also hope that the school can find a proper balance between the development of students’ personal interest and their performance in the exam. (104 words)
Wish the Curriculum Reform a success!
Yours sincerely,
Li Ping

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