第二节短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误.每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(Λ).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:(1)每处错误及其修� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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14．第二节短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．

Mr．White turned over in bed from time to time in last night，for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep．Yesterday morning，he went to a big gardening company，knowing as Green Fingers，for the interview．Mr．White，that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden，looking forward to the job offered by the company．When he got to the company，he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job．While waited，he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road．Unluckily，he was the only one who finally got the job，so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful．

分析本文讲述了一个面试的故事．
怀特先生期盼能在一家被称作绿色手指的园艺公司得到一份工作，因为他想要帮助爷爷种花．当他去面试的时候，发现很多人都来面试，所以担心自己可能会得不到这份工作．结果他得到了这份工作，经理解释是因为只有他在等待面试的时候，帮助工人挪走路边倒下的树．

解答 Mr．White turned over in bed from time to time in last night，for he was very excited that he could not fall asleep．Yesterday morning，he went to a big gardening company，knowing as Green Fingers，for the interview．Mr．White，that liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden，∧looking forward to the job offered by the company．When he got to the company，he found there were many people waiting there and he had no ideas whether he could get the job．While waited，he helped the workers there to remove the fallen trees and clear the road．Unluckily，he was the only one who finally got the job，so the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful．
解析：
1．去掉in．考查介词． last night前面不用介词．
2．very改为so．考查固定句式．修饰形容词excited和 that 构成固定句式，表示"如此…以至于"用so．
3．knowing改为known．考查非谓语动词．定语knowing as Green Fingers修饰a big gardening company，而且二者之间是被动关系，所以用known．
4．the改为a．考查冠词．第一次提到interview用不定冠词a，表示"一次会面"．
5．that改为 who．考查关系词．非限制性定语从句liked to help his grandfather grow flowers in the garden缺少主语，先行词是Mr．White，所以关系词用who．that不用于非限制性定语从句．
6．looking前加was或改为looked．考查动词的时态．根据上文可知讲述的是过去的故事，所以用一般过去时态或现在进行时．表示"他（正）期盼着这份工作"．
7．ideas改为idea．考查名词．根据同位语从句whether he could get the job．可知这里的idea只表示他能否找到这份工作这一件事，所以用单数．
8．waited改为waiting．考查非谓语动词．表示状语 waited和主语he之间是主动关系，所以用waiting．也可以认为While（he was）waiting．
9．Unluckily改为Luckily．考查副词．根据he was the only one who finally got the job可知这是一件幸运的事，所以用Luckily．
10．so改为 because．考查连词．he was the only one who finally got the job的原因是 the manager decided to give the job to whoever he believed was helpful．所以用 because．

点评考查语法改错．
状语从句的省略
一般说来省略现象多出现在下列五种状语从句中：由 when，while，as，before，after，till，until，once等引导的时间状语从句；由whether，if，unless 等引导的条件状语从句；由 though，although，even if，whatever等引导的让步状语从句；由 as，than 等引导的比较状语从句；由as，as if，as though 等引导的方式状语从句．上述状语从句在省略时，并非任何成分都可以省略而是遵循下面原则：
（1）当状语从句的主语与主句的主语一致时，可以省略状语从句的主语和系动词be．例如
Once （he was）a worker，Pang Long now becomes a famous singer．庞龙曾经是个工人，现在变成一位著名的歌手．
（2）当从句的主语是 it，谓语动词中又含有系动词be 时，可以把it和系动词be一起省略．此时构成连词（if，unless，when，whenever）+形容词的结构．如：
Unless （it is） necessary，you'd better not refer to the dictionary．如果没有必要，你最好不要查字典．