Question

13．阅读下面短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
Ten years ago，Sun Shenglong gave up his job of an annual salary of 600，000yuan to become a full-time father．After ten years of hard work，he has finally made his daughter become a violin virtuoso （大师）．
What Sun Shenglong did has aroused wide public concern in China．In September，his new book"Who kidnapped Chinese parents？"which took him 10years of efforts to write was published．But in the process of publication，both editors and staff are wondering：Is that worth it？Why do some parents sacrifice their lives for their children？Do children really want their parents to accompany them？
Some people argue that adults have their own lives．It is not worth sacrificing their own well-being for children．Others think that Sun Shenglong forced changes in the children's growth．
Indeed，Sun Shenglong had to have his own business．He experienced a lot of pain since childhood：his father died and his mother remarried．He worked as a little tailor，a high school teacher，a newspaper reporter and editor，and finally achieved the implementation of a Shanghai newspaper editor which was to him a brilliant future wave．
It was then that his daughter learned to play the violin and revealed the talent．Several violin experts said she would be potential for development．So，Sun Shenglong completely gave up his job and went all out to accompany his daughter．
His painstaking efforts finally bear fruit．His daughter won several international awards and has become famous worldwide．
写作内容
1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容．
2．以约120个词谈谈你对父母该不该为了孩子成才而牺牲自己的事业的想法，内容包括：
（1）你同意上文中这位父亲的做法吗？
（2）以你父母或者你周围的一些父母为例，谈谈他们是如何为子女成才做出牺牲；
（3）你对父母为了孩子牺牲自己的事业的看法．
写作要求
1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称．
评分标准
概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，语篇连贯．
In order to have enough time to accompany his daughter to learn theviolin，Sun Shenglong gave up his well-paid job to be a full-time father，which has caused a heateddebate in China．
I am not in favor of what Sun Shenglong did although he has succeeded inturning his daughter into a violin virtuoso．However，many parents around me also make sacrifices for theirchildren．Some change their jobs while others move near the key schools in orderto make it more convenient for their children to study．And some mothers even giveup their favorite jobs to accompany their children．
As for me，I don't think it is appropriate for parents to quit their jobs in orderto provide better conditions for their children．For one thing，parents have their own careers and they can display theirtalents and make contributions to society．For another，children should learn to pursue their dreams on their owninstead of totally depending on their parents．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照"三段式"模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由或列举事例．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时．人称一般用第三人称．重要短语：in order to（目的是），accompany sb （陪伴某人），give up sth （放弃某物），cause a heated debate （引起热烈的争辩），make sacrifices for （为…做出牺牲），quit sth  （放弃），provide sth for sb （给某人提供某物），make contributions to…（认识，结识…），pursue one's dreams（追逐梦想），depend on（依赖，依靠）．

解答 In order to have enough time to accompany his daughter to learn theviolin，Sun Shenglong gave up his well-paid job to be a full-time father，which has caused a heateddebate in China．【高分句型】（概括）
I am not in favor of what Sun Shenglong did although he has succeeded inturning his daughter into a violin virtuoso．However，many parents around me also make sacrifices for theirchildren．Some change their jobs while others move near the key schools in orderto make it more convenient for their children to study．And some mothers even giveup their favorite jobs to accompany their children．（举例说明父母是如何为子女成才做出牺牲的）
As for me，I don't think it is appropriate for parents to quit their jobs in orderto provide better conditions for their children．【高分句型】For one thing，parents have their owncareers and they can display their talents and make contributions to society．For another，children should learn topursue their dreams on their own instead of totally depending on their parents．（自己的看法）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．