Question

英语课上，老师要求同桌同学相互修改作文。假设以下作文是你同桌所写的，请你对其进行修改。文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（/\），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处。

I’m the only daughter of my parents. So they are worried about everything I do. For example, when I rode my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride by myself. They are afraid I might fall off my bike and hurt me. They are taking great trouble to support the bike, with my mother even carry a first-aid box. I’m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone?” Now, most family have one child．Parents want to do everything for their children. This does no good to them. Too many love from parents may prevent children from independent. In my opinion, parents should let their children do what they should do lonely.　

Answer 1

I’m an only daughter of my parents. So they are worried about everything I do. For example,

the

when I rode my bike, my parents won’t let me to ride by myself. They are afraid I might fall off  

ride

my bike and hurt me. They are taking great trouble to support the bike, with my mother

             myself

even carry a first-aid box. I’m not free to ride and I often say angry, “Why not let me ride alone?”

carrying                                    angrily

Now, most family have one child．Parents want to do everything for their children. This does

families

no good to them. Too many love from parents may prevent children from ∧independent. In my

much                                     being

opinion, parents should let their children do what they should do lonely.

                                                    alone