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4．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者 （从第11处起）不计分．
As senior three approaching，I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with my parents．I always feel grateful for his unselfish care and love．Thanks to their constant encouragement，I have made rapid progresses in my studies．
It will be less than one month since the final exam，so I am under the pressure now．I would appreciate if they could have a frequent talk with me but provide me with timely help，which contributes to keep a good state．
I have make up my mind to study hard，for I believe hard work was the key to success．
Meanwhile，I will spare some time to participate in various sports activities to build up my body．

分析 本文讲述了随着高三的临近作者所做的一些准备，包括和父母交谈，希望得到他们的鼓励与帮助．作者下定决心要努力学习，因为相信努力工作是成功的关键．同时，作者下定决心要努力学习，并会抽出一些时间来参加各种体育活动来锻炼身体．

解答 As senior three approaching，I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with my parents．I always feel gratef
With（或把approaching改为approaches）
ul for his unselfish care and love．Thanks to their constant encouragement，I have made rapid progresses i
        their                                                                                                                             progress
n my studies．
It will be less than one month since the final exam，so I am under the pressure now．I would appreciate∧if t
                                            before                                                                                                  it
hey could have a frequent talk with me but provide me with timely help，which contributes to keep a good sta
                                                         and                                                                             keeping
te．
I have make up my mind to study hard，for I believe hard work was the key to success．
         made                                                                              is
Meanwhile，I will spare some time to participate in various sports activities to build up my body．
解析：
1．As-With或approaching-approaches．考查介词和连词的不同．as是连词，后面跟句子，所以用As senior three approaches；而with是介词，后面用复合结构，所以用With senior three approaching．表示随着高三的临近．
2．his-their．考查代词．根据上文talk with my parents可知作者要和父母谈谈，所以用their代替父母．
3．progresses-progress．考查名词．progress"进步"是不可数名词，所以没有复数．
4．since-before．考查连词．因为主句It will be less than one month 是将来时，所以用before，表示在最终考试之前还有不到一个月．
5．去掉the．考查冠词．表示在压力之下用under  pressure 或under the pressure of sth．，所以去掉the．
6．appreciate后面加it．考查代词it的用法．appreciate后不能直接用宾语从句，需要用it做形式宾语．即I would appreciate it if…
7．but-and．考查连词．根据they could have a frequent talk with me （他们能和我多聊聊）和 provide me with timely help（给我及时的帮助）的句义，可知两句是递进关系，所以用and．
8．keep-keeping．考查非谓语动词．句子中的contributes to"导致"，to是介词，用doing做宾语．
9．make-made．考查谓语动词的时态．句子I have make up my mind to study hard是现在完成时态，所以用make的过去分词made．
10．was-is．考查动词的时态．hard work was the key to success表示"努力工作是成功的关键"，这是客观事实，所以用一般现在时．

点评 考查短文改错．
since是自从的意思；before是在～～之前
1．一段时间+since，表示从这个时间开始到现在---自从～～～以来
用法上It+（ 现在完成时 ）+一段时间+since+（ 一般过去时 ）
例句：It is/has been four days since I caught a cold．我感冒已四天了．
2．一段时间+before，表示在这个时间之前，或者大约在这个时间上就会发生某事
用法上It+（ 一般将来时 ）+一段时间+before+（ 一般现在时 ）
例句：It will be five years before he meets you again．五年之后他就会再见你的．

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